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理发师

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-22 05:32:37 Post subject: 理发师

理发师理发师把我的头剪来剪去他是一个扎小辫的男理发师他即将撤掉披布时，我告诉他我并不满意因为我没有感觉我的发型像稻浪那样有层次他于是很生气他像个任性的孩子在我头上撒野我很想骂他但一个挑着猪头卖的小贩走过我的视野我于是笑了并心甘情愿的付给他工钱 2007-12-22 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-22 06:03:50 Post subject:

绝啊～

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-22 08:34:58 Post subject:

冲浪, 这首不好圣诞节快乐, 白水溜了

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-12-22 15:14:46 Post subject:

同樓上，讀起來像微型小說。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-22 15:59:37 Post subject:

看来，让大家接受新事物是很难的。唉！唉！！就没有感觉这是后现代么？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-12-23 01:39:14 Post subject:

從來只看文本，對文學流派或潮流不感冒。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

nobody
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Posted: 2007-12-23 02:57:46 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

從來只看文本，對文學流派或潮流不感冒。

戴老师一定不苟言笑。
冲浪顽皮呢 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-12-23 03:13:33 Post subject:

我很想骂他但一个挑着猪头卖的小贩走过我的视野我于是笑了并心甘情愿的付给他工钱其实我喜欢这首诗！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-12-23 19:23:07 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

我很想骂他
但一个挑着猪头卖的小贩走过我的视野
我于是笑了
并心甘情愿的付给他工钱

其实我喜欢这首诗！

这几句，我感觉很别致，能否说说理解？
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Posted: 2007-12-24 10:23:40 Post subject:

头比头发重要 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-26 10:20:56 Post subject:

欣赏这个不错提 _________________ 莞君

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-26 13:39:23 Post subject:

好像没人亮红牌, 人呢?

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Posted: 2007-12-26 16:03:54 Post subject:

归纳下海军的观点: 头比头发重要我自己再加个观点: 理出的头发再没有波浪,总比猪头好看多了

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-27 14:00:48 Post subject:

谢谢各位的解读，很恰当。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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