梅奈何 童生
Joined: 20 Feb 2007 Posts: 75 Location: 天津 梅奈何Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-21 18:17:08 Post subject: 钗头凤-雪月 |
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钗头凤-雪月
文/梅奈何
天边月,谁轻噎,
桂花香怎凄零夜。
伤流景,淋霜影,
银蟾囚定,玉人心病,
冷、冷、冷!
青云榭,凝思结,
一朝翩做晶莹雪。
依松岭,酣梅兴,
浑然寻梦,梦中春醒,
静、静、静! _________________ 梅骨傲严寒,风霜奈我何
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-23 17:51:28 Post subject: |
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含蓄深婉。 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-29 14:36:23 Post subject: |
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不管那,天边月,谁轻噎,
只祝愿,梅奈何,新年快乐平安夜! |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-03 22:25:10 Post subject: |
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上阕写尽了现实中的凄清冰冷,下阕梦中翩跹为亮点,醒来凄然更觉寒。写得的确好。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-04 02:14:25 Post subject: |
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伤流景,淋霜影,
银蟾囚定,玉人心病,
问好 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-04 09:58:51 Post subject: |
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凄婉好词! |
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