梅奈何
童生
Joined: 20 Feb 2007
Posts: 75
Location: 天津
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 Posted: 2007-12-21 18:17:08 Post subject: 钗头凤-雪月 |
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钗头凤-雪月
文/梅奈何
天边月，谁轻噎，
桂花香怎凄零夜。
伤流景，淋霜影，
银蟾囚定，玉人心病，
冷、冷、冷！
青云榭，凝思结，
一朝翩做晶莹雪。
依松岭，酣梅兴，
浑然寻梦，梦中春醒，
静、静、静！
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梅骨傲严寒，风霜奈我何
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-12-23 17:51:28 Post subject: |
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| 含蓄深婉。 |
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暗香如沁
秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2007-12-29 14:36:23 Post subject: |
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不管那，天边月，谁轻噎，
只祝愿，梅奈何，新年快乐平安夜！ |
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荷梦
进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
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| 上阕写尽了现实中的凄清冰冷，下阕梦中翩跹为亮点，醒来凄然更觉寒。写得的确好。 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-01-04 02:14:25 Post subject: |
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伤流景，淋霜影，
银蟾囚定，玉人心病，
问好 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2008-01-04 09:58:51 Post subject: |
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| 凄婉好词！ |
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