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[微型诗] 梅花四咏

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-12-20 18:40:59 Post subject: [微型诗] 梅花四咏

拙诗发表在台湾《葡萄园》2008年夏季号上。梅花四咏周道模腊梅立身天地心流香…… 钱割瓶囚自感痛漫人间…… 白梅飘落的是雪晶融化的是雪水她们拥抱的才是雪花绿梅一朵一朵的小嘴舔破寒雾…… 吐一串春…… 红梅在残冬的背上抽一鞭血影…… 2007-12-21上午9：42 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2007-12-20 19:02:52 Post subject:

别有韵味悄悄地吐春…… 她拥抱的才是雪花 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-20 19:17:22 Post subject: 感觉很好

很有回味的几个 _________________ 莞君

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-20 20:26:35 Post subject:

欣赏

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-20 20:37:12 Post subject:

道模, 喜欢这几首小诗. 凄美, 灵动, 感人. 随便问一句, 为什么不参赛呢

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-12-22 08:31:03 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们的鼓励！我可能发错了，现重发参赛栏目。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-12-22 15:16:17 Post subject:

白雪最好。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-12-27 15:30:10 Post subject:

腊梅重写，白梅小改。请批评。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-27 15:34:52 Post subject:

提给大家再赏问好您 _________________ 莞君

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-12-28 04:46:05 Post subject:

问好莞君！祝诗意人生！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-08-05 04:29:50 Post subject:

今日对小诗又作了一次修改。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-08-05 06:36:07 Post subject:

腊梅　　　痛闷～～十几天打不开北美枫了，今天才打开～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-08-05 20:07:26 Post subject:

最喜欢<腊梅>,形象和寄意结合较为完美. _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-08-06 14:56:17 Post subject:

谢谢阿依琼裙和司马策风君的鼓励！为几句小诗，改了几次，包括发表过后仍在改，“为伊消得人憔悴”啊！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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