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与妻家务（新律二首）

山城子
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Posted: 2007-11-12 05:09:09 Post subject: 与妻家务（新律二首）

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白水
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Posted: 2007-11-12 05:39:48 Post subject:

老师这真是古韵新音啊, 朗朗上口, 内容有新意.

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2007-11-13 00:19:23 Post subject:

今天刚来，又欣赏到你的诗　呵呵　问好

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2007-11-13 00:19:40 Post subject:

今天刚来，又欣赏到你的诗　呵呵　问好

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2007-11-13 00:20:32 Post subject:

今天刚来，又欣赏到你的诗　呵呵　问好

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-11-13 01:25:04 Post subject:

格格楞楞日子说话亲亲切切心情未曾老掉

山城子
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Posted: 2007-11-13 07:46:01 Post subject:

谢谢以上三位诗友的光临！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

莞君
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Posted: 2007-11-13 10:05:43 Post subject:

欣赏了问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2007-11-14 07:55:52 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

欣赏了问好

谢谢哦朋友莞君！

莞君
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Posted: 2007-11-14 08:26:41 Post subject:

感觉不错提问好 _________________ 莞君

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-20 05:42:34 Post subject:

再谢莞君！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

nobody
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Posted: 2007-12-20 06:13:21 Post subject:

可以结集“与妻”了。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-20 06:31:40 Post subject:

谢谢nobody朋友！我在报刊上发过近百篇散文，1/3是“与妻”的呢！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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