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《金黄的草垛》
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 02:54:51    Post subject: 《金黄的草垛》 Reply with quote

《金黄的草垛》



让我们回到金黄的草垛上面。

回到岁月里最高的山峰。回到

月光下的大海。整个村庄涌动,

山林像翻起的波浪。每天我们

像两颗露珠在甲板上滚动,彼此

进入对方的身体,成为一只鹞鹰

在秋水静谧的田野留下飞翔的身影
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 03:21:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌, 真美
仅用露珠是写不出来的
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 04:35:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个感觉很好,我有一种温暖的感觉。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 16:55:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌大气灵动!欣赏,问好!!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 18:11:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 18:14:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

保持一贯水准。欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 21:20:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

很美的意境
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PostPosted: 2007-12-20 06:00:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

思路放得很开,生活的美好感觉~欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-20 19:25:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

精彩 欣赏了问好
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PostPosted: 2007-12-20 21:37:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

成为一只鹞鹰
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PostPosted: 2007-12-21 16:39:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢楼上各位诗人!!!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-21 17:34:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

阅!
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