杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-18 02:54:51 Post subject: 《金黄的草垛》 |
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《金黄的草垛》
让我们回到金黄的草垛上面。
回到岁月里最高的山峰。回到
月光下的大海。整个村庄涌动,
山林像翻起的波浪。每天我们
像两颗露珠在甲板上滚动,彼此
进入对方的身体,成为一只鹞鹰
在秋水静谧的田野留下飞翔的身影 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-18 03:21:23 Post subject: |
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诗歌, 真美
仅用露珠是写不出来的 |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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彭世学 秀才
Joined: 24 Jun 2007 Posts: 187 Location: 中国 彭世学Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-18 16:55:24 Post subject: |
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诗歌大气灵动!欣赏,问好!! _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松,栖鸟是她唯一的养料
我的博客:
http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue
《网文荟萃》报:http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-18 18:11:25 Post subject: |
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问好 |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-18 18:14:08 Post subject: |
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保持一贯水准。欣赏。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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黑雨滴 秀才
Joined: 11 Jun 2007 Posts: 144
黑雨滴Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-19 21:20:19 Post subject: |
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很美的意境 _________________ 个人主页:http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-20 06:00:41 Post subject: |
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思路放得很开,生活的美好感觉~欣赏! |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-20 19:25:08 Post subject: |
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精彩 欣赏了问好 _________________ 莞君 |
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子花 秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Posts: 722
子花Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-20 21:37:16 Post subject: |
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成为一只鹞鹰
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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韩少君 进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-21 17:34:11 Post subject: |
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阅! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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