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七律．冬日黄昏感怀

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Posted: 2007-12-17 11:32:18 Post subject: 七律．冬日黄昏感怀

为扫尘香雪作邻，邀来日暮寄祥云。三分秀水环朱户，四季青山绕玉门。莫道红尘无大我，需知前路有真君。此心放眼黄昏处，满目严寒尽是春。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-12-17 11:40:41 Post subject:

满目严寒尽是春。好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-12-17 16:28:23 Post subject:

寓意深，欣赏。

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Posted: 2007-12-18 07:42:02 Post subject:

韵律晓畅,对仗工巧,诗情如春,欣赏学习. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-12-18 08:12:27 Post subject:

"莫道红尘无大我,需知前路有真君"一联, 抒发了宽怀的气度,乐观的生活态度,特欣赏这两句. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-12-18 19:23:26 Post subject:

谢谢谢谢各位老师。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-12-19 17:32:38 Post subject:

先贤遗风,后学情怀;巾帼心思,须眉气概!好! 不才嘀咕,"尘香"可改?

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Posted: 2007-12-20 17:53:01 Post subject: Re: 七律．冬日黄昏感怀

暗香如沁 wrote:

为扫尘香雪作邻，邀来日暮寄祥云。三分秀水环朱户，四季青山绕玉门。
莫道红尘无大我，需知前路有真君。此心放眼黄昏处，满目严寒尽是春。

读暗香的诗词，总是令人感到华丽情真，心旷神怡。实乃阳春白雪之作。在下不才，和一首下里巴人水平的。见笑了。 Razz

步韵和暗香如沁　雪　（于渥太华.加拿大）

偶与麋獐为近邻，天河欲倾锁彤云。不惊夜半风拍户，更喜清晨雪掩门。
千里长驱何忘我，一心唯愿会诸君。推杯换盏兴浓处，且把严冬作早春。

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Posted: 2007-12-22 01:28:20 Post subject: Re: 七律．冬日黄昏感怀

他乡客 wrote:

暗香如沁 wrote:

为扫尘香雪作邻，邀来日暮寄祥云。三分秀水环朱户，四季青山绕玉门。
莫道红尘无大我，需知前路有真君。此心放眼黄昏处，满目严寒尽是春。

读暗香的诗词，总是令人感到华丽情真，心旷神怡。实乃阳春白雪之作。在下不才，和一首下里巴人水平的。见笑了。 Razz

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Posted: 2007-12-27 04:30:17 Post subject:

感谢各位老师鼓励。更要感谢他乡客老师的和诗.收藏。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2008-01-13 02:53:12 Post subject: Re: 七律．冬日黄昏感怀

他乡客 wrote:

暗香如沁 wrote:

为扫尘香雪作邻，邀来日暮寄祥云。三分秀水环朱户，四季青山绕玉门。
莫道红尘无大我，需知前路有真君。此心放眼黄昏处，满目严寒尽是春。

读暗香的诗词，总是令人感到华丽情真，心旷神怡。实乃阳春白雪之作。在下不才，和一首下里巴人水平的。见笑了。 Razz

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今天稍将咱的作和修改一下，贴出来再凑趣。 Smile

和暗香如沁　《雪天渥村图》　（他乡客　于渥太华.加拿大）

常与麋獐为近邻，天河欲倾锁彤云。不惊夜半风拍梦，更喜清晨雪掩门。
绘画吟诗追雅士，飞山越涧赛神君*。推杯换盏情浓处，屋外严冬屋内春。

*　渥太华20里外即山地滑雪运动基地。冰雪运动在此地为老少皆宜的体育项目。

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