| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-18 19:09:22    Post subject: 七绝—赏梅抒怀 |   |  
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				|   雨雪飘摇独秀回,残冬将尽为谁开?
 古今暗诉襟怀去,岁月无言雅韵来。
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		| 暗香如沁 秀才
 
 
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-18 22:13:30    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢暗香姐点评!  |  | 
	
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		| 楚人 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-19 19:03:16    Post subject: |   |  
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				| '岁月无言雅韵来"好句!但承转我觉得稍显平淡了点,供参考. |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-19 22:31:53    Post subject: |   |  
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谢谢楚人兄点评!问好 
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