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蓦山溪.遥祭

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Posted: 2007-12-14 07:59:59 Post subject: 蓦山溪.遥祭

问君知否，君去天流泪。满目菊花残，都随了、双溪憔悴。而今有几，快意在红尘，不惧死，不贪生，不枉人情味！惊鸿一跳，羞也羞吾辈。纵写百篇诗、那如兄、军魂之魅。将心痛省，还与本来真，邀皓月，煮清茶，千里遥相祭！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-12-14 09:25:20 Post subject:

祭得沉痛 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-12-14 10:33:22 Post subject: Re: 蓦山溪.遥祭

暗香如沁 wrote:

问君知否，君去天流泪。满目菊花残，都随了、双溪憔悴。而今有几，快意在红尘，不惧死，不贪生，不枉人情味！惊鸿一跳，羞也羞吾辈。纵写百篇诗、那如兄、军魂之魅。将心痛省，还与本来真，邀皓月，煮清茶，千里遥相祭！

苍天悲泪眼，同作悼离词！
“君去天流泪”，画龙点睛。
把人情提升到天理，遥祭时代精英，词作更为深刻深沉！

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Posted: 2007-12-14 16:36:16 Post subject:

真情之作，感人。

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Posted: 2007-12-14 16:46:14 Post subject:

心仰英烈,遥祭军魂,感人之作. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-12-18 19:16:33 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

祭得沉痛

因为他感动了咱浙江.
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Posted: 2007-12-18 19:18:25 Post subject: Re: 蓦山溪.遥祭

冰清 wrote:

暗香如沁 wrote:

苍天悲泪眼，同作悼离词！
“君去天流泪”，画龙点睛。
把人情提升到天理，遥祭时代精英，词作更为深刻深沉！

谢谢老师鼓励。
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Posted: 2007-12-18 19:19:25 Post subject:

爱松 wrote:

真情之作，感人。

感谢兄长评阅。
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Posted: 2007-12-18 19:20:20 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

心仰英烈,遥祭军魂,感人之作.

感谢.
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