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乞丐与垃圾的交流(外三首)

彭世学
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Posted: 2007-12-18 17:18:07 Post subject: 乞丐与垃圾的交流(外三首)

乞丐与垃圾的交流(外三首) 彭世学一个乞丐浑身爬满了苍蝇用一根短短的木棍在垃圾中搅动仿佛和久违的故友长时间地握手乞丐弯着腰保持和垃圾近距离心中的千言万语心中的酸甜苦辣通过一根特殊的导线传递给天涯沦落人乞丐与垃圾作深度交流直至碰撞出心灵的火花蜜蜂一天早晨一辆公共汽车向县城驶去犹如一只蜜蜂飞向美好的未来秋天的早晨空气清新阳光一出来犹如无数的金丝雀落满了大地蜜蜂继续飞行一块一块金黄一幢一幢高楼一片一片彩霞犹如画家笔下的风景次第展开这只兴奋的蜜蜂似乎嗅到了生活的芬芳加快了速度无题亭亭玉立的少女在一展万里的田畴上忽走忽停象命定的鸽子徘徊于我多事的掌中一动不动的云与我形影相吊太阳远远地望我如正午的猫眼只有殷勤的风儿卖弄清脆的嗓子置我于斑斓的音流老谋深算的黄雀在果子坠落的一瞬张开了贪婪之口继而疾飞而去秋天天高云淡秋水开始变蓝风尘仆仆的旅人在千里之外怀念一片海落叶卸去秋天的灿烂风高谈阔论石头沉默寡言鸟一只只飞离将大山深处的故事带向遥远 _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-12-18 18:05:52 Post subject:

乞丐与垃圾的交流，题目很惊怵，让人很期待。诗本身似乎稍嫌弱了一点。但仍然令人欣赏。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-18 18:14:06 Post subject:

问好需要打磨

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Posted: 2007-12-19 06:13:16 Post subject:

乞丐与垃圾作深度交流直至碰撞出心灵的火花很有感触问好世学, 双节快乐.

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Posted: 2007-12-19 20:53:26 Post subject:

再提下。也总是很同情那些无家可归的人。今晚出去吃饭，又碰见黑人兄弟沿街乞讨。天极冷。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-21 20:13:59 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

乞丐与垃圾的交流，题目很惊怵，让人很期待。诗本身似乎稍嫌弱了一点。但仍然令人欣赏。

多谢nobody评点！这首诗就描写了一个乞丐用一根木棍在垃圾堆搅动，寻找值钱的东西。问好！！
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彭世学
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Posted: 2007-12-21 22:40:22 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

问好

需要打磨

谢谢！
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我的博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue
《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-12-21 22:42:24 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

乞丐与垃圾作深度交流
直至碰撞出心灵的火花

很有感触

问好世学, 双节快乐.

问好白水！问好！！
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认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料
我的博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue
《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-12-21 22:49:07 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

再提下。
也总是很同情那些无家可归的人。今晚出去吃饭，又碰见黑人兄弟沿街乞讨。天极冷。

大家都有一颗同情、怜悯之心！谢谢nobody"！问好！！
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我的博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue
《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-12-22 00:43:02 Post subject:

提读！！问好！！

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Posted: 2007-12-26 10:27:51 Post subject:

不错提上问好 _________________ 莞君

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