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日子如流水一样淌过(四首)
郭全华
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PostPosted: 2007-12-17 03:26:06    Post subject: 日子如流水一样淌过(四首) Reply with quote

◎离开安庆◎

繁华像花瓣
渐次凋落,逝去。
高速的车上,我感觉是逃遁。
一个半小时后,太湖到了
像回到旧衣服里
掀衣角的风也不常来。
天黑了,与回家的爱人和孩子相聚
我们彼此没有看到
应有的惊喜

◎返回◎

我强行适应辛勤依旧的
众多眼睛。回到教室
孩子们没有惊异
我的外表还是旧的,他们也还在
桎梏里扑腾。
城市的高档宾馆里
吃过的饭菜
和开发区潮流的巨响
已经在我四肢周游。
为了尽快恢复往日气氛
我必须抑制它们恍惚升腾。

◎清明时节◎

春天快完了,该关注祖先。
赖在太平盛世
并不全是开心。
整个三月,河水安静
像极了白色坟墓。远方也是白色的
我疏远它们多年
我不是白鸟,一个爱过我的人
曾经在蓝天下等我,还是选择了离开
清明了,应该更伤感一些
但我没有。我在远离古人
甚至远离母亲的城市里
开支工资和爱情
我无法打造零碎的星火,和虫鸣。
春天快完,花朵也收摊了
我的赞美也告一段落
清明这样过去
我偶尔看远方,更多的时候
低头无语


◎校长撤职了◎

校长是我的朋友
他一个人走在山路上
有农民跟他打招呼
他答应不是,不答应也不是
他们并不知道
因《半月谈》说了学校收费的事
县长被省长叫去了
回来县长就把他撤了
他的老婆至今没工作
这里从没撤过局长和县长
他一个人走在山路上
像一棵枯萎的庄稼
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-12-17 04:34:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

◎离开安庆◎

繁华像花瓣
渐次凋落,逝去。
高速的车上,我感觉是逃遁。
一个半小时后,太湖到了
像回到旧衣服里
掀衣角的风也不常来。
天黑了,与回家的爱人和孩子相聚
我们彼此没有看到
应有的惊喜


意境打造给人一种无奈和伤感~
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PostPosted: 2007-12-17 18:39:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

《离开安庆》

比较好
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郭全华
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 05:44:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好二位.多谢指点
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 21:02:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

已经写得很老练自如了。不是新手也不是俗手。欣赏。
也是老师啊,哈哈。这里老师真多(我一大家子也是)。
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