山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-27 05:04:29 Post subject: 《小雪后的天气》 |
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《小雪后的天气》
文/ 山城子
确实是从北国拂来的春风鹅黄
抵达黔中小雪后的晴朗吉祥
一枝梨花乍开清香沁脾如梦
笑醒后白花花阳光涌进落地窗
哦!这样好的天气该如何珍惜
女人说转一圈野外天天照例
红子满枝未落却提前开了小花
像我一样错觉了此时的节气
错也未错这样清澈的妩媚心情
人生难得是千年百世的相逢
策划明秋转一大圈经沪至辽
会亲叙友畅睹医巫闾山的风貌
2007-11-27巳时记 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-27 05:36:57 Post subject: |
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| 一枝梨花乍开清香沁脾如梦.................问好兄.远握. |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-27 07:39:40 Post subject: |
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问好福治! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-27 07:40:16 Post subject: |
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提 很好的一个 欣赏了 _________________ 莞君 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-28 06:50:16 Post subject: |
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谢谢莞君! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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游旋1 童生

Joined: 19 Nov 2007 Posts: 72 Location: 中国-贵州-遵义-凤冈 游旋1Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-28 08:08:58 Post subject: |
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老乡,你在那呀?下雪那,好啊!
问好,欣赏了。 _________________ 用文字结缘 拿鸿雁对话 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-29 06:54:16 Post subject: |
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我再平坝乡下呀! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-29 07:08:24 Post subject: |
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| 我这里许多年都看不到雪,羡慕啊~ |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-29 16:42:29 Post subject: |
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| 感觉得到老师的好心情, 问好 |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-29 18:01:53 Post subject: |
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下雪后
不错的心情 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-29 23:29:54 Post subject: |
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谢谢明月!
谢谢白水!
谢谢迪拜! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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吉祥女巫 童生
Joined: 12 Nov 2007 Posts: 63 Location: 江苏连云港 吉祥女巫Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-29 23:51:30 Post subject: |
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| 我也来再来看看你的诗 呵呵 问好山城子 |
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上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-30 01:45:22 Post subject: |
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问好山城子老师 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-07 08:12:06 Post subject: |
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问好明月、白水、迪拜! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-07 08:33:26 Post subject: |
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| 吉祥女巫 wrote: |
| 我也来再来看看你的诗 呵呵 问好山城子 |
呵呵!好高兴你来这里了! |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-07 08:43:18 Post subject: |
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——问好伤城! |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-07 18:41:48 Post subject: |
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建议搂主 向无我诗歌进发 :)
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-16 07:00:56 Post subject: |
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| kokho wrote: |
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建议搂主 向无我诗歌进发 :)
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谢谢!我会的! |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-16 19:40:41 Post subject: |
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再赏 问好您 _________________ 莞君 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-20 05:24:53 Post subject: |
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谢谢 !!! |
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