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白水
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Posted: 2007-12-11 19:16:28 Post subject: 蝶恋花<飞絮>

蝶恋花<飞絮> 薄雪残花飞乱絮弱柳临风倦鸟无归处欲向神仙求普度佛家不种菩提树哽咽情伤难寄语声涩琵琶痛断离别曲昨夜问君愁几许? 寒星暗月遥相觑

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-12-11 19:44:57 Post subject:

写心境呢不错 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-12-11 22:52:58 Post subject:

婉转语句，令人潸然

晓松
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Posted: 2007-12-11 23:01:45 Post subject:

令人为之动容！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-12-13 18:25:45 Post subject:

飞絮惹离愁,思緒悠悠,情意悠悠,问好白水. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-12-13 18:33:54 Post subject:

情满词句。

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-13 20:38:43 Post subject:

谢谢各位朋友, 有你们应该高兴才是. 从你们那学了很多, 特别是你们的人品. 问好.

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-12-14 07:30:06 Post subject:

整个上阕让人深思。下阕动容．学习。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

冰清
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Posted: 2007-12-14 10:07:08 Post subject: Re: 蝶恋花<飞絮>

白水 Moonlight wrote:

蝶恋花<飞絮>

薄雪残花飞乱絮
弱柳临风
倦鸟无归处
欲向神仙求普度
佛家不种菩缇树

哽咽情伤难寄语
声涩琵琶
痛断离别曲
昨夜问君愁几许?
寒星暗月遥相觑

情缠绵,意深沉！
造景炼字都非常好。
收藏，学习了！

一品豆腐
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Posted: 2007-12-14 17:47:46 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

ＭＭ，你这诗歌让人读着好感动。只是ＪＪ诗思竭了，，，，，， Embarassed

思无居所念无诗，蝶恋花儿尚有痴。
心静神闲犹未已，多情多感怎相迟？
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白水
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Posted: 2007-12-14 19:48:38 Post subject:

临屏, 见笑了. <七绝> 蜂狂蝶舞为谁诗? 古曲新歌几个痴? 醉倚缪斯千载梦, 醒来方晓悔时迟.

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-14 20:18:19 Post subject:

暗香如沁, 冰清. 谢谢你们. 问好.

一品豆腐
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Posted: 2007-12-14 23:14:46 Post subject:

自古文人浩叹诗，不过对酒解幽痴。两唇一碰千秋话，消遣无穷说尽迟。 _________________

梅影三叠
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Posted: 2007-12-15 01:48:52 Post subject:

欣赏呢：）

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-15 13:01:23 Post subject:

梅影三叠 wrote:

欣赏呢：）

问好影影

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-15 13:02:01 Post subject:

一品豆腐 wrote:

自古文人浩叹诗，不过对酒解幽痴。
两唇一碰千秋话，消遣无穷说尽迟。

谢谢一品

<七绝>

云散烟飞碎尽诗
潸然绡冷烛焚痴
一杯薄酒邀天地
粉绢灰蝶袅未迟

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-16 01:36:09 Post subject:

倦鸟何需求仙家，菩提原本在诗心。情景互融，白水这词的确填得好

一品豆腐
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Posted: 2007-12-16 13:45:00 Post subject:

对酒当歌醉梦诗，凭窗不谢两眸痴。何须为表花前意，风送一声相忆迟。 _________________

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-16 20:51:01 Post subject:

临屏草和一品MM, PEACE

七绝<上菜留客>

葱香姜辣拌鸡丝
温酒相斟飞雪时
风冷冰滑天留客
吟诗香袅又几枝

七绝<上菜留客二>

一束红椒缀玉丝
操勺锅灶客来时
娇梅白雪碟中画
借与花魁折桂枝

一品豆腐 wrote:

又是肥肠溜爆诗，眼摇珠翠合心时。
徘徊频驻空留顾，香雪何干马足迟。

hepingdao wrote:

摇头晃脑酱油诗
雕楼小翠凭窗时
香雪才积三分浅
何来梨花满琼枝
Very Happy

一品豆腐 wrote:

清蒸乱炖走油诗，一曲新成不谢时。
偏是牵衣留客醉，含羞欲放小寒枝。

一品豆腐
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Posted: 2008-01-02 02:00:59 Post subject:

姐姐，国内的事情办完了，我又要飞了，嘻嘻看花不语苦寻诗，空恨白云离合时。甘洒一襟清秀泪，眸浮眶满涨何迟。一片油花一首诗，清汤宽尽不堪时。冷枫红舞娇波处，尚忆疏云淡月池。一壶可乐煮姜丝，羞艳香凝暖胃时。有赋飘然未能免，游人如绣两三枝。未肯琴心懒拨丝，尖椒炒肉味来时。漫撩诗兴纤纤意，撚蕊怜香又一枝。香夺绮罗宜雪后，幽泉未落韵空时。何人窗下随瓶倒，故作酣声脉脉思。强吟风景还偷吃，用尽清油用尽痴。空羡一支云遏笔，相逢便问咏枫诗。水碗端平两头吃，非明非暗孔方痴。杯边裙里虚空界，截段肥肠寄梦诗。人言有梦泛临诗，次第肥肠栉比痴。候月无关流沛筑，回廊曲榭步矜迟。一张玉脸两层妆，八院九宫心纵狂。五步成诗六吆喝，调三斡四七分装。沁水银河半落川，前池文酒过云烟。承冠欲识嫦娥面，裹梦相思复卷棉。油过地瓜漫拔丝，蘸来白水口开时。文轩莺对清和浊，妙舞轻回拂柳枝。上苑梅香欲待诗，引来飞雪作花痴。自言尘解凡间事，指处垂烟障远池。人传无梦不成诗，有梦谁堪枉续痴？白水门前扁舸拢，何言幽咽瑟娇枝？广座清弦着彩妆，嚼声酒令对杯狂。临空奉此鹅毛宴，一品芙蓉豆腐香。雪压梅花有几枝？春风不过问何痴？临窗强忍旋杯泪，不肯吟来半首诗。 _________________

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