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卜算子.寄梅
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 23:18:31    Post subject: 卜算子.寄梅 Reply with quote
冷月挂中庭，是处人难静。酒意三分累故情，醒又从何醒？
磨砚在幽窗，几见孤梅影。两样心思一样寒，默默相呼应。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 23:57:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
谁把幽词挥泪尽，只因未道伤心处。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-08 05:27:44    Post subject: Re: 卜算子.寄梅 Reply with quote
暗香如沁 wrote:




冷月挂中庭，是处人难静。酒意三分累故情，醒又从何醒？
磨砚在幽窗，几见孤梅影。两样心思一样寒，默默相呼应。


孤独之感油然而生。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 02:39:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
这样的凄清之境，心戚然。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 18:44:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
冷月寄梅飘寒意，何处情归依。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 19:02:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
低沉了一点.试和一阕,望斧正.

寄梅

飞雪过轩庭,人静心难静.借酒一觞古与今,似醉何清醒?
皎色窥幽窗,瘦干掬孤影.洗破烦愁不畏寒,日月皆呼应! Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 06:24:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
非常精彩，欣赏．
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:37:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:
谁把幽词挥泪尽，只因未道伤心处。

谢谢雪的评阅．问好。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:37:50    Post subject: Re: 卜算子.寄梅 Reply with quote
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暗香如沁 wrote:




冷月挂中庭，是处人难静。酒意三分累故情，醒又从何醒？
磨砚在幽窗，几见孤梅影。两样心思一样寒，默默相呼应。


孤独之感油然而生。
好久不见。老师。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:38:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
荷梦 wrote:
这样的凄清之境，心戚然。。。
对不起．问好新朋友。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:38:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
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冷月寄梅飘寒意，何处情归依。
嗯。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:39:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
楚人 wrote:
低沉了一点.试和一阕,望斧正.

寄梅

飞雪过轩庭,人静心难静.借酒一觞古与今,似醉何清醒?
皎色窥幽窗,瘦干掬孤影.洗破烦愁不畏寒,日月皆呼应! Laughing


立意已远在暗香之上．何来斧正。
惭愧．暗香学习并收藏了。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:40:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
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非常精彩，欣赏．



谢谢老师。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 17:42:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
暗香如沁 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
冷月寄梅飘寒意，何处情归依。
嗯。


冷月飘寒意，何处情归依。同感~
暗香MM，“嗯。”是啥意思呀？ Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 17:48:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 19:24:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好雪.
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