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冬天在窗外闲逛
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 01:27:15    Post subject: 冬天在窗外闲逛 Reply with quote

冬天在窗外闲逛

冬天在窗外闲逛

一些白晃晃的事物,冉冉上升
那不是雪
那是内心深处某抹羽毛
最灵异的颤动

触摸一条河流
挽歌阵阵
去岁槐花明朝飞燕
暴光于苍白
介于具象与抽象之间的
鹅卵石,成为一种鱼
努力撞水

素面的女子
千年妖精或一尾灵狐
解构黑色之元
妖气虽森森
清泉也染唇

冬天在窗外闲逛
夜晚与时间
一生都难洗干净的
沙子.一脚陷进去
或泪握凝望
  或歌舞飞翔

    2007年12月11日黎明
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 02:49:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

有灵性
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 02:52:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙发!!欣赏!很有章法语言老道!!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 14:28:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

李贺之后
好文笔
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 14:37:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

冬天在窗外闲逛

一些白晃晃的事物,冉冉上升
那不是雪
那是内心深处某抹羽毛
最灵异的颤动
-----起笔很抓人!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 01:27:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

一些白晃晃的事物,冉冉上升
那不是雪
那是内心深处某抹羽毛
最灵异的颤动

《》意象万千 :)

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PostPosted: 2007-12-13 02:57:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好朋友们!握手!!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-13 18:46:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

有灵动的感觉
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