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抖落，不如打坐

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-10 06:27:17 Post subject: 抖落，不如打坐

那几片凌乱的飞舞其实，远在千里之外我，却无法侧目而过招来一地鸡毛, 活该抖落，不如打坐我有慧根知道此刻应当深呼吸，闭目，念禅三遍明镜非台，明镜非台明镜非台

游旋1
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Posted: 2007-12-10 06:45:00 Post subject:

欣赏~~ _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-10 18:06:19 Post subject:

欣赏感觉很好提问好 _________________ 莞君

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-10 20:47:17 Post subject:

不错, 问好

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Posted: 2007-12-10 21:43:55 Post subject:

非常好的~~~ 问好! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-12-10 23:15:27 Post subject:

不错的诗！问好！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-11 14:55:17 Post subject:

游旋1 wrote:

欣赏~~

谢游旋欣赏！

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-11 14:56:26 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

欣赏感觉很好提问好

问好莞君，谢谢欣赏与支持！ Embarassed

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Posted: 2007-12-11 14:58:41 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

不错, 问好

白水，每个人写自己的感受都不能说错的！所以就“不错”啦！呵呵，回好！

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Posted: 2007-12-11 14:59:25 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

非常好的~~~

问好!

谢谢你的鼓励！阿依琼裙

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-11 15:01:00 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

不错的诗！问好！

一些随感偶发，多谢鼓励啦！

kokho
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Posted: 2007-12-12 01:29:24 Post subject:

。我，却无法侧目而过招来一地鸡毛, 活该《》　多多鼓励　明镜非台　：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-12 23:22:12 Post subject:

抖落，不如打坐我有慧根知道此刻应当深呼吸，闭目，念禅三遍 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-12-13 01:36:57 Post subject:

欣赏,问好~

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