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七律（二首）
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 17:51:05    Post subject: 七律（二首） Reply with quote
有谁拘束雪含娇，留语断魂分付潮。着意运胸千尺浪，倚桥临水一支箫。
相将泪眼杯中忍，偶对秋香梦里描。但取春前渐枝上，漫题幽艳不稀寥。
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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 17:52:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
鼠眼贼眉闲溜望，灯油未有豆油香。九街八巷梁间混，一库三仓洞里忙。
有问裘皮为何白，萦思门齿怎么黄。如今休待殷勤语，好把琼英碎唾光。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 18:13:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
是然笛回来了. 真想你了:rose
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 19:33:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
姐姐，你说的然笛，估计是二姐，我排行在三，老话儿一般称呼为“三孬子”
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 19:38:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
一品豆腐 wrote:
姐姐，你说的然笛，估计是二姐，我排行在三，老话儿一般称呼为“三孬子”

那你怎么把你JJ的北极熊偷来了 Confused
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 19:49:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
一品豆腐 wrote:
姐姐，你说的然笛，估计是二姐，我排行在三，老话儿一般称呼为“三孬子”

那你怎么把你JJ的北极熊偷来了 Confused


姐姐，麻烦你在JJ和北极熊之间加个的，否则别人会以为我二姐叫北极熊

我贴那张图，是觉得好玩儿
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 19:57:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
你真是个小皮蛋. 加上了, 满意了吧.Smile

光顾聊天了，　ＭＭ，你这诗歌让人读着好感动。只是ＪＪ诗思竭了，，，，，， Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 20:08:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
这诗歌一串一串的
姐妹也是
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-13 17:22:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
第二首七律讽喻深刻,刻画恶鼠,入骨三分.i
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:35:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
我说这又是哪个调皮的来了啊．晕了。这帮鬼精灵．
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 11:41:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
暗香如沁 wrote:
我说这又是哪个调皮的来了啊．晕了。这帮鬼精灵．



一品豆腐房, 精灵皮罗装。
现做现卖好，美名天下扬。

Laughing 晕！
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 17:33:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
这诗歌一串一串的
姐妹也是
Very Happy


这话说的，好像我们的诗词是羊粪蛋蛋似的
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 17:34:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
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第二首七律讽喻深刻,刻画恶鼠,入骨三分.i


谢谢黄老师赏评！
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 17:36:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
暗香如沁 wrote:
我说这又是哪个调皮的来了啊．晕了。这帮鬼精灵．


这就晕了？我们姐妹有四十多人，要是都来了，你还不晕趴下起不来了？
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 17:40:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰清 wrote:
暗香如沁 wrote:
我说这又是哪个调皮的来了啊．晕了。这帮鬼精灵．



一品豆腐房, 精灵皮罗装。
现做现卖好，美名天下扬。

Laughing 晕！


谢谢冰清老师！
怎么老师也晕了？
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