秋叶
秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769
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 Posted: 2007-12-11 00:58:14 Post subject: 五绝－梅 |
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我以前有一诗写梅的，从另外一个意境，以物喻人，凄苦而坚强，宁静致远，每每读起，很是不安。
五绝－梅
晚雪潜郊野， 村头三两枝。
冒寒仍苦立， 寂寂待春迟。 |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2007-12-11 09:55:05 Post subject: |
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冒寒仍苦立，寂寂待春迟。
的确别有一番风味！ |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2007-12-11 16:51:58 Post subject: |
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| 秋叶寒梅，别具一格。 |
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秋叶
秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769
秋叶Collection |
| Posted: 2007-12-11 17:27:33 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢冰清，qinghongh二位词长赏读。 |
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楚人
童生
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 63
Location: 中国大陆
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| Posted: 2007-12-11 17:48:46 Post subject: |
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久未见秋叶兄大作,近来可好?
斗胆次韵一和,祈正.
梅
傲雪雄苍野,
吟风秀俏枝.
幽魂翛万古,
素靥笑春迟. |
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秋叶
秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769
秋叶Collection |
| Posted: 2007-12-14 09:34:28 Post subject: |
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| 楚人 wrote: |
久未见秋叶兄大作,近来可好?
斗胆次韵一和,祈正.
梅
傲雪雄苍野,
吟风秀俏枝.
幽魂翛万古,
素靥笑春迟. |
好诗，谢谢楚人兄和作，近来甚忙，问好。 |
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野航
秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
野航Collection |
| Posted: 2007-12-23 15:27:33 Post subject: |
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问好秋叶兄！祝圣诞快乐！
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-12-23 17:47:21 Post subject: |
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| 另有新意。 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
| Posted: 2007-12-26 16:49:46 Post subject: |
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| 秋叶兄的诗，有一种笔力苍劲的感觉。 |
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