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好歌新词-18:《你总是藏着》--为《陈楚生-有没有人告诉你》填新词

楚天舒
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Posted: 2007-12-10 04:23:08 Post subject: 好歌新词-18:《你总是藏着》--为《陈楚生-有没有人告诉你》填新词

你总是藏着注1. 谨以此歌献给父亲在外地工作的小朋友们. 注2.此歌刊登在《渥京周末.原创空间》2007/11/2 填词/楚天舒(2007年10月21) 曲/《陈楚生-有没有人告诉你》 http://www.youtube.com/v/OEzRVWS0Y2M 当墙角生日礼物爬满了尘埃我便想起你已经好久没回来早读过明月中思亲人的诗句妈却指着牛郎和织女多羡慕邻家大卫夏夜去camping 多希望你能带我湖边去fishing 同学们问我滑雪滑冰的兴趣我对谁说心中的委屈你总是藏在电话里说大道理你总是藏在睡梦里和我捉迷你总是藏在飞机里飞来飞去难道现在都已成结局

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-10 18:16:28 Post subject:

欣赏问好 _________________ 莞君

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-10 18:26:12 Post subject:

歌词不错~问好!

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-10 19:08:30 Post subject:

感觉挺好, 问好

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-10 23:41:29 Post subject:

感觉不错。欣赏了！握 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

照夜
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Joined: 09 Dec 2007
Posts: 37

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Posted: 2007-12-11 06:55:58 Post subject:

支持天舒！ _________________ 潮起潮落，酌一杯风云；花开花谢，品半盏日月。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/banjiangyuhuo5

楚天舒
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Posted: 2007-12-11 08:29:34 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

欣赏问好

多谢鼓励...
祝好

楚天舒
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Posted: 2007-12-11 08:30:21 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

歌词不错~问好!

凑凑热闹...

祝好

楚天舒
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Posted: 2007-12-11 08:31:50 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

感觉挺好, 问好

呵, 你感觉挺好, 就好啦...

祝好

楚天舒
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Posted: 2007-12-11 08:35:46 Post subject:

照夜 wrote:

支持天舒！

欢迎贵客驾到...多谢不远万里,来到加拿大, 多谢接龙大作..

白水, 学写歌词, 请找这位大师..照夜歌词写得特棒... Cool

照夜
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Posted: 2007-12-18 04:56:18 Post subject:

天舒。。在诗词的世界里。。照夜永远是个小学生。。。。先为大家烹茶煮酒。。。。 _________________ 潮起潮落，酌一杯风云；花开花谢，品半盏日月。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/banjiangyuhuo5

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