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《白色的屋顶》
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PostPosted: 2007-12-08 21:51:03    Post subject: 《白色的屋顶》 Reply with quote

《白色的屋顶》

当你说白色屋顶,我多想说雪花
说清明世界。可我知道
屋顶是另一重天,它离我们这么近
天天和我们的三餐眼对着眼
我们穿的是气力,吃的是气力
从没昧过良心
天寒地冻,我们用亲情取暖
让牛羊归圈,不伤及皮毛和柴禾
十步之外,有黑色屋顶
有人拿酒精麻醉沉重的呼吸
十步之外,走出红色屋顶的人
买笑买醉,举手间
纳税人的血如泼出去的水
这些年,鲜花依着垃圾鲜艳
多少人辱没了跪拜祖先的双膝
头顶三尺有神灵,我祈愿
在白色屋顶下,幸福和清贫


《又一年》

一块石头浸沉在河底
从桃花走到梅花
你在岸上不言不语
我无法对着同一条河流说爱
但石头还在
还会用旧年的叹息
送走一瓣瓣桃花


《空隙》

我们这些小鱼
在网眼里游来游去
如果空隙撕大点
我们会惊为一片天
天塌下来,是大鱼的事
我们的心
却疼得要命
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PostPosted: 2007-12-08 22:21:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

哲思!提上来
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PostPosted: 2007-12-08 22:23:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

耐读的几首!最喜欢第二首,虽短,但动人!第一首里的在物欲横行的社会中独守着一身清白的人令人敬佩。第三首能激起共鸣。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 01:53:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

天塌下来,是大鱼的事
我们的心
却疼得要命
呵呵!很有意思的一个,问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 02:47:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩,不错~更喜欢后两首!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 08:25:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

共鸣
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PostPosted: 2007-12-09 17:33:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

《又一年》

最好

客观的,冷静的描述

没有“没有必要的主观陈述”,

含有“诗性的韵味”
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 18:23:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好各位诗友!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 00:03:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的。
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