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《白色的屋顶》

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-12-08 21:51:03 Post subject: 《白色的屋顶》

《白色的屋顶》当你说白色屋顶，我多想说雪花说清明世界。可我知道屋顶是另一重天，它离我们这么近天天和我们的三餐眼对着眼我们穿的是气力，吃的是气力从没昧过良心天寒地冻，我们用亲情取暖让牛羊归圈，不伤及皮毛和柴禾十步之外，有黑色屋顶有人拿酒精麻醉沉重的呼吸十步之外，走出红色屋顶的人买笑买醉，举手间纳税人的血如泼出去的水这些年，鲜花依着垃圾鲜艳多少人辱没了跪拜祖先的双膝头顶三尺有神灵，我祈愿在白色屋顶下，幸福和清贫《又一年》一块石头浸沉在河底从桃花走到梅花你在岸上不言不语我无法对着同一条河流说爱但石头还在还会用旧年的叹息送走一瓣瓣桃花《空隙》我们这些小鱼在网眼里游来游去如果空隙撕大点我们会惊为一片天天塌下来，是大鱼的事我们的心却疼得要命 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-12-08 22:21:41 Post subject:

哲思！提上来

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Posted: 2007-12-08 22:23:08 Post subject:

耐读的几首！最喜欢第二首，虽短，但动人！第一首里的在物欲横行的社会中独守着一身清白的人令人敬佩。第三首能激起共鸣。

游旋1
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Posted: 2007-12-09 01:53:09 Post subject:

天塌下来，是大鱼的事我们的心却疼得要命呵呵!很有意思的一个,问好! _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

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Posted: 2007-12-09 02:47:18 Post subject:

恩，不错～更喜欢后两首！

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Posted: 2007-12-09 08:25:40 Post subject:

共鸣

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Posted: 2007-12-09 17:33:23 Post subject:

《又一年》最好客观的，冷静的描述没有“没有必要的主观陈述”，含有“诗性的韵味”

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-12-10 18:23:38 Post subject:

问好各位诗友！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-12-12 00:03:53 Post subject:

很好的。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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