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［原创］魔术女孩儿

赵雅君
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Posted: 2007-12-09 06:37:57 Post subject: ［原创］魔术女孩儿

魔术女孩儿(诗歌) 　吉林　赵雅君让我假设你的眼神也是道具搬山弄云微笑移来海潮所有的这些都是让人们相信，天女散花天衣无缝直至，灯亮起来之前你把自己变到一个人的心里春天在你的袖子里不露痕迹没有春花过渡，暗示正在进行的演出是否与我置身的凉秋有关

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-09 07:57:16 Post subject:

秋雾

kokho
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Posted: 2007-12-09 12:52:04 Post subject:

春天在你的袖子里不露痕迹没有春花过渡，暗示《》　让我痴。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-09 17:40:24 Post subject:

写的不错

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-10 18:04:17 Post subject:

直至，灯亮起来之前你把自己变到一个人的心里春天在你的袖子里不露痕迹没有春花过渡，暗示正在进行的演出是否与我置身的凉秋有关欣赏了不错问好 _________________ 莞君

kokho
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Posted: 2007-12-12 01:24:07 Post subject:

。再读　：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-13 16:54:22 Post subject:

不错的诗歌

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-13 19:46:56 Post subject:

直至，灯亮起来之前你把自己变到一个人的心里春天在你的袖子里不露痕迹没有春花过渡，暗示正在进行的演出是否与我置身的凉秋有关学习~

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-13 20:18:04 Post subject:

进来学习！

游旋1
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Posted: 2007-12-14 02:06:53 Post subject:

拜读并问好！ _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-14 02:55:07 Post subject:

越写越好了！！祝贺！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-12-14 04:21:52 Post subject:

阅。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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