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kokho
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PostPosted: 2006-12-13 20:31:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
月光 wrote:
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读了 很多次，终于看到 你与众不同的营造 ！！！

我改不了，我收回我的评语 成功的创作。。。

向你学习！


好失望 Crying or Very sad


都向你　举白旗　投降了，还不满意？

你有ＳＭ倾向呀？ Shocked Shocked Rolling Eyes

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白水
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PostPosted: 2006-12-13 21:45:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
kokho wrote:
月光 wrote:
kokho wrote:
读了 很多次，终于看到 你与众不同的营造 ！！！

我改不了，我收回我的评语 成功的创作。。。

向你学习！


好失望 Crying or Very sad


都向你　举白旗　投降了，还不满意？

你有ＳＭ倾向呀？ Shocked Shocked Rolling Eyes

。


对不起, 我只是希望大家有真诚的交流才能提高. 其实我也知道写批评的帖是最难的. ANYWAY, THANKS LOT.
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2006-12-13 22:18:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
月光 wrote:


对不起, 我只是希望大家有真诚的交流才能提高. 其实我也知道写批评的帖是最难的. ANYWAY, THANKS LOT.


我是给你一点喜剧效果　逗你呢！

你这首，是很好，我没水平改的。。。

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PostPosted: 2006-12-14 13:59:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
再读，依然收获多多。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-15 19:00:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
kokho wrote:
月光 wrote:


对不起, 我只是希望大家有真诚的交流才能提高. 其实我也知道写批评的帖是最难的. ANYWAY, THANKS LOT.


我是给你一点喜剧效果　逗你呢！

你这首，是很好，我没水平改的。。。

。。


KOK, 你这个乐天派一谦虚我反到不习惯了. 好吧, 我先给你捣捣乱. Very Happy
http://oson.ca/bbs/bmf/viewtopic.php?p=5465#5465
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PostPosted: 2006-12-15 19:10:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
左岸 wrote:
再读，依然收获多多。


谢谢左岸, 多批评, 交流, 提高. Very Happy
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