古井
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 Posted: 2007-12-07 03:05:37 Post subject: ★取暖 |
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★取暖
你始终没有提及你的婚姻
你的眼神彻底把我陷进深渊
石头压死的丈夫，拴在炕上哭喊的孩子
庄稼地里像男人一样喝斥牲口的你
后来我们谈及小时候，上学，冬天
你说那时的冬天不寒冷
说到雪时你唯一用了一个形容词
下雪后你会站在门后面等我
我踢一脚你家大门后就走了
我在前面踩脚印
你跟在后面，说话我不搭理
拐弯处我滑倒了，手还筒在袖子里
你扶起我，拍打身上的雪
手麻木了，你就放在我腋下
我笑着，等你再说杏花岭的春天
说到捂手时，你笑着，失声地流泪 |
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kokho
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| Posted: 2007-12-07 18:57:41 Post subject: |
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很深沉的乡村生活诗歌 ：）
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nobody
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| Posted: 2007-12-07 19:55:14 Post subject: |
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很有现场感。
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韩少君
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| Posted: 2007-12-07 23:29:56 Post subject: |
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感人的细节。
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迪拜
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| Posted: 2007-12-07 23:56:16 Post subject: |
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| 不错 |
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-12-08 07:57:35 Post subject: |
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| 细腻, 感人. |
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古井
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| Posted: 2007-12-08 19:12:50 Post subject: |
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| kokho wrote: |
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很深沉的乡村生活诗歌 ：）
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谢谢老师品点！ |
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古井
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| Posted: 2007-12-08 19:15:08 Post subject: |
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问好！ |
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