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闲修旧稿：《在故乡做客（组诗）》

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-08 06:55:41 Post subject: 闲修旧稿：《在故乡做客（组诗）》

闲修旧稿：《在故乡做客（组诗）》文/ 山城子〈收拾白菜〉它们一堆又一堆地懒散在阳光下要收拾一回蓬头垢脸进家 “百菜不如白菜 ” 侄媳们享受咯咯楞楞说话我临时做了搬运工从后园到前院的暖棚一抱抱由衷亲切儿时情景自然经济退守最后阵地日子正在无声地风化〈推“倒骑驴”〉老伴的同学去卖白菜 “倒骑驴”我们谁也不会踩乡道很平坦赶集的人都路上自由自在我们推着寒风刮鼻刮脸一路玄玄乎乎左拐右歪不幸遭遇自行车一声哗啦啦天上的太阳笑着无奈〈卷缮子〉大户人家已经电器成卷缮机内弟户小还在残喘臂力时间难耐何必双臂闲闲早晚两次我登上棚顶高寒卷起来请进心中的明媚放下来冰冷的逼袭隔开农家日子在呵护下缓缓行走如壁上挂钟陈旧的钟摆〈劈柴〉生命走到尽头的它们从一个建筑工地下来满身水泥钉锈如被辞掉的农民工横躺竖卧窗外我用锯子重新启动规划臂膀将一圈圈年轮劈开呵呵！高兴得欢蹦乱跳火炉会因它们的新生而畅快 2005-12-1/2 2007-12-8修改于文化村

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Posted: 2007-12-08 07:16:21 Post subject:

每读你的诗歌都让人感到生活的温馨

游旋1
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Posted: 2007-12-09 01:54:34 Post subject:

耐读,耐品,学习了,问好 _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-09 05:23:56 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

每读你的诗歌都让人感到生活的温馨

问好白水！

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-09 06:09:17 Post subject:

游旋1 wrote:

耐读,耐品,学习了,问好

问好朋友游旋！

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-09 17:18:36 Post subject:

自然状态

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-10 06:26:29 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

自然状态

_问好迪拜！

nobody
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Posted: 2007-12-10 13:00:56 Post subject:

精彩而富有情趣的一组。这个“在故乡做客“的题目就很棒。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-12-10 13:01:23 Post subject:

精彩而富有生趣的一组。这个“在故乡做客“的题目就很棒。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-10 17:45:30 Post subject: 感觉不错

喜欢的作品问好 _________________ 莞君

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-10 19:11:13 Post subject:

山城子老师的诗意生活~

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-10 23:35:48 Post subject:

很有情致！！问好山城子诗人！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-15 07:35:37 Post subject:

谢谢nobody！谢谢莞君！谢谢半溪明月！谢谢杨海军！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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