Maple Review Home
   Chinese Literature Society of North America | Maple Review | Immigrants in Canada | Angel Studio | The Driftwood Artist Society | Ocean of Poetry | Island of Music
"HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
  
 FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   RegisterRegister  ProfileProfile    Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Sign inSign in   BlogsBlogs    Weblogs NewsWeblogs News   AlbumAlbum 
English Home Bilingual Home Chinese Home
Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌 Post new topic   Reply to topic
守望
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-06 04:05:11    Post subject: 守望 Reply with quote

守望
__守望的岁月/ 全球诗友大接龙节选

彼岸, 彼岸可是荒漠?
月牙泉水
可是一位痴情的女子*
等待的泪光

夫君
随驼铃而去
驼铃随风而去 风吹
不见碧草
唯有长河落日
圆 那是久久的守望




*她曾是我的邻居, 丈夫陡然病逝, 每每见她带着幼年的孩子顽强的生活, 总有为她写点什么的冲动
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
杯中冲浪
进士出身


Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-06 04:19:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的一首接龙诗,贴题,有故事,有意境,语言不拖泥带水,锤炼的很好。
_________________
杯中冲浪.披履而行
http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-06 06:49:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

这图片是真的?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Blog
hepingdao
Site Admin


Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106

hepingdaoCollection
PostPosted: 2007-12-06 15:39:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

真的好图
Very Happy
_________________
为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-06 16:50:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
很好的一首接龙诗,贴题,有故事,有意境,语言不拖泥带水,锤炼的很好。


谢谢冲浪, 好不容易听到你的赞扬, 挺高兴的 Very Happy
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-06 16:51:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
这图片是真的?


Very Happy Very Happy
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-06 16:52:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
真的好图
Very Happy


YOU ARE SO SMART Very Happy Very Happy
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
全乐吧
童生


Joined: 20 Nov 2007
Posts: 51

全乐吧Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-07 04:26:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

太好了,特欣赏
_________________
http://hi.baidu.com/fullhappy/
相逢何必曾相识,萍水之谊网络縁
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
博弈
榜眼


Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
博弈Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-07 07:10:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

看起来好像是台湾的野柳女王头?
_________________
(在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Blog Visit poster's website
古井
秀才


Joined: 01 Jun 2007
Posts: 190

古井Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-07 07:59:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

女王头,震撼的图片!收笔极妙哦!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
kokho
进士出身


Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
kokhoCollection
PostPosted: 2007-12-07 18:44:00    Post subject: Reply with quote



来看看你 :)

。。
_________________
乒乓、摄影、诗歌
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-08 08:22:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

全乐吧 wrote:
太好了,特欣赏


谢谢喜欢, 很想读到你的诗歌
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-08 08:27:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
看起来好像是台湾的野柳女王头?


野柳, 女王? 多么不协调而又神奇的名字. 给人以顽强的生命力.更合适配这首诗歌了,更合适给天下那些坚韧的母亲. 她们是用泪水在养育生命.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-08 08:31:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

古井 wrote:
女王头,震撼的图片!收笔极妙哦!


哈, 那天我在电话里对朋友小得意的也是这句, 结果朋友笑我: 抱着个红薯对别人说, 就是不喜欢吃奶油蛋糕 Very Happy
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-12-08 08:32:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho wrote:


来看看你 :)

。。


问好KOK Wink
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
Display posts from previous:   
Emoticons
Very Happy Smile Sad Surprised
Shocked Confused Cool Laughing
Mad Razz Embarassed Crying or Very sad
Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil Rolling Eyes Wink
Exclamation Question Idea Arrow
View more Emoticons
Page 1 of 1           View previous topic View next topic    
Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌    Post new topic   Reply to topic
Jump to:  


Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME