| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-06 04:05:11    Post subject: 守望 |   |  
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				| 守望 __守望的岁月/ 全球诗友大接龙节选
 
 彼岸, 彼岸可是荒漠?
 月牙泉水
 可是一位痴情的女子*
 等待的泪光
 
 夫君
 随驼铃而去
 驼铃随风而去 风吹
 不见碧草
 唯有长河落日
 圆 那是久久的守望
 
 
 
   
 *她曾是我的邻居, 丈夫陡然病逝, 每每见她带着幼年的孩子顽强的生活, 总有为她写点什么的冲动
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		| 杯中冲浪 进士出身
 
 
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		| 半溪明月 榜眼
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-06 06:49:43    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 这图片是真的? |  | 
	
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		| hepingdao Site Admin
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-06 15:39:13    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 真的好图 
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 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-06 16:50:21    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 杯中冲浪 wrote: |  
	  | 很好的一首接龙诗,贴题,有故事,有意境,语言不拖泥带水,锤炼的很好。 |  
 谢谢冲浪, 好不容易听到你的赞扬, 挺高兴的
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-06 16:51:39    Post subject: |   |  
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-06 16:52:58    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | hepingdao wrote: |  
	  | 真的好图 
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		| 全乐吧 童生
 
  
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		| 博弈 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-07 07:10:51    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 看起来好像是台湾的野柳女王头? _________________
 (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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		| 古井 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-07 07:59:00    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 女王头,震撼的图片!收笔极妙哦! |  | 
	
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-07 18:44:00    Post subject: |   |  
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 来看看你 :)
 
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 乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-08 08:22:47    Post subject: |   |  
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 谢谢喜欢, 很想读到你的诗歌
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-08 08:27:45    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 博弈 wrote: |  
	  | 看起来好像是台湾的野柳女王头? |  
 野柳, 女王? 多么不协调而又神奇的名字. 给人以顽强的生命力.更合适配这首诗歌了,更合适给天下那些坚韧的母亲. 她们是用泪水在养育生命.
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-08 08:31:48    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 古井 wrote: |  
	  | 女王头,震撼的图片!收笔极妙哦! |  
 哈, 那天我在电话里对朋友小得意的也是这句, 结果朋友笑我: 抱着个红薯对别人说, 就是不喜欢吃奶油蛋糕
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-12-08 08:32:23    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | kokho wrote: |  
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 来看看你 :)
 
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