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七绝—双女依竹图
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 00:23:41    Post subject: 七绝—双女依竹图 Reply with quote

语笑嫣然话雅幽，天寒难阻赏梅柔。
轻言细吐依潇碧，拟定诗情伴雪游。
“潇碧”： (竹的别名)
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 08:41:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
梅在画外,而诗人加以合理想象,如此则拓展了画面.

进而丰富了诗的内容.
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 11:40:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
语笑嫣然，轻言细吐，拟定诗情

细腻、传神，好！
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 15:11:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
轻柔如工笔。
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楚人
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 16:24:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
嫣然语笑鹅毛扇,
襟袖单薄不畏寒.
细吐轻言一片好,
昏花老眼雾中看. Embarassed
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 17:11:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
梅在画外,而诗人加以合理想象,如此则拓展了画面.

进而丰富了诗的内容.
谢谢您的点评！
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 17:14:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰清 wrote:
语笑嫣然，轻言细吐，拟定诗情

细腻、传神，好！
谢谢冰清老师点评，问好！
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 17:15:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
轻柔如工笔。
谢谢GG点评，问好GG！
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 18:14:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
楚人 wrote:
嫣然语笑鹅毛扇,
襟袖单薄不畏寒.
细吐轻言一片好,
昏花老眼雾中看. Embarassed

谢谢楚人关注！
回和楚人
闲话笑谈摇鹅扇，
伴行竹韵抵严寒。
欢声尽动幽香绽，
不枉天然巧弄丹。 Razz
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