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宣城田斌
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PostPosted: 2007-12-05 22:32:47    Post subject: 诗韵江南(组诗) Reply with quote

诗韵江南(组诗)



田 斌



《海边即景》





是水中的花

风一吹

便生动起来

千帆如影



扬帆

是需要技巧的

那一双粗糙如茧的手

把持着船帆 把持着命运

在风里浪里





也许戴着墨镜看

更富有情趣

你看船上的人扬帆

船上的人看你伫立沙滩

都是一幅画

阳光下

印在了海上 沙滩





《起雾的早晨》



雾从水面上升起

炊烟从屋顶上升起

轻柔在弥漫

不知是雾包容了炊烟

还是炊烟融入了晨雾



姐姐在屋后的菜园地拔菜

像扯下了大地的皮毛

我痛了一下

姐姐在水边洗菜的身影

漾起一圈一圈的涟漪

不一会 便被浓雾吞没

迷茫中 只有记忆的思绪



乡村人家 青菜一般简朴的生活

我呆在寂静的一角

默恋着流逝的时光

只到太阳露出了笑脸

才将我诗意的眷恋

和盘托出





《荷塘情趣》



太阳将荷塘一幅

浓墨重彩的画打开

生动了我眷恋的目光

着花衣的姐姐戴笠摇橹

划向水的深处



荷叶拍打船舷在风中曳动

碧浪一波一波

涟漪一波一波

目光里不知是姐姐的脸颊红润

还是怒放的荷花别样鲜红

水声里响起的谣曲

以及让人忘归的老酒

醉了游人



最是那诗意的红蜻蜓

伫立枝头

把一段痴情的梦

跌落在了水乡荷塘







《小镇老街》



不知从何说起

老街幽深的石板路

磨光了鞋跟

古老 是小镇的历史



木板房睁着窗户的眼睛

看过去 也看现在

盯着时光斑剥的记忆

一梦千年



那个撑着花伞

结着怨愁的姑娘

我来小镇

寻不见她的足迹和身影



好在一个时尚的少女

阳光一样青春的脸

鲜活了我的目光

鲜活了小镇









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PostPosted: 2007-12-05 22:54:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

碧浪一波一波

涟漪一波一波

中文字的奇妙
这里仿佛就有了波的动感散开来
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迪拜
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2007-12-05 23:15:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-12-06 04:13:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗如画
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 19:09:12    Post subject: Reply with quote



试试 去掉 你我他。。

希望你早日突破 朗诵诗歌的范畴 :)

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宣城田斌
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PostPosted: 2007-12-13 16:58:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢!问好各位!
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