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七绝

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Joined: 21 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-12-04 18:36:35 Post subject: 七绝

《韵》今天风雪满天飘明日是否晴当空谁的歌声这么美唱得地下全是雨解释一下看起来在下雪，可是落在地上时却是雨水，有失雅兴，天不作美啊《律》今夜没酒空对月拿笔愁绪东流去一眼不尽浓幕处惟等寒霜映天白解释一下没有酒喝，只好拿起笔不知写些什么，这时起一股妖风吹起了浓浓大雾，我只好看着白哗哗的寒霜降临直到天亮什么韵律什么格律，感受到的就是仙韵律。哈哈哈

晓松
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Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-12-05 19:06:53 Post subject: Re: 七绝

朋友，看过你的现代诗，还算不错。所以，看了几首在古韵版发的诗，原以为你是在玩世不恭，故意不好好写。现在看来不是。对于古诗，的确尝试不多，一些最基本的押韵都没掌握，更不用说平仄了及对仗了。既然你想学写古诗，常来交流。欢迎！

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