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同题（现代诗歌）---《梅》

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-02 21:55:08 Post subject: 同题（现代诗歌）---《梅》

《梅》你把指骨伸进冬的火炉迸出骨髓一朵朵凝固在枝头天地白了你沉进冬里更深窥视不清此花和彼花于是我屈膝把脸埋进雪地闻到你的香吻到你的手握住冬天的内心握满了花

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-02 22:01:23 Post subject:

于是我屈膝把脸埋进雪地闻到你的香吻到你的手握住冬天的内心握满了花欣赏子花的诗歌~

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-12-02 22:06:28 Post subject:

好。欣赏！有天赋。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-02 22:51:42 Post subject:

感人之作.

子花
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子花Collection

Posted: 2007-12-02 23:23:59 Post subject:

感谢明月、少军、和白水三位诗人的肯定！！更愿意看到各位的批评！！

南岩
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Posted: 2007-12-03 03:43:35 Post subject:

结尾那几句实在是喜欢,那动人了,问候 _________________ 诗观:用犀利的语言穿越人们的身躯! http://blog.sina.com.cn/nanyanfish

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-04 03:47:05 Post subject:

感谢南岩诗人！多批评！！花了一定心思的作品很期待前辈们亮出你们的刀！！！！子花先感谢了！！

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-04 05:24:50 Post subject:

请查短讯

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-04 05:53:08 Post subject:

哦！！去看看是什么！！谢谢白水提醒！！

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-04 06:32:14 Post subject:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=53635#53635

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-04 19:09:58 Post subject:

看了！感谢白水诗人！！以及各位朋友！

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