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发呆
小字不识
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 19:44:18    Post subject: 发呆 Reply with quote
冬天的早晨,我躺在被窝里,
看着天花板发呆,
以前它在我的头上,
现在它在我的对面,
有很多的人和事在对面。

我辗转下身子,对面是一面墙,
皲裂的白痕,
一颗钉子锈在上面。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 20:06:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
很有意思，喜欢。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 20:09:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
冬天的早晨,我躺在被窝里,
看着天花板发呆,
以前它在我的头上,
现在它在我的对面,

很喜欢这段. 写出了新意.换一个角度看问题, 绝Very Happy
欢迎新朋友

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=9890
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 22:03:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
深入点就好了~欢迎新朋友!
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2007-12-04 00:27:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
现代感
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-05 19:46:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
耐品。
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单菲
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PostPosted: 2007-12-06 05:37:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
冬天的早晨,我躺在被窝里,
看着天花板发呆,
以前它在我的头上,
现在它在我的对面,

很喜欢这段. 写出了新意.换一个角度看问题, 绝Very Happy
欢迎新朋友

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思维角度的收获
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-12-07 19:07:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
欢迎新朋友！有点意思。问好。
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