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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 19:16:52    Post subject: 滑雪趣事 Reply with quote

滑雪趣事

(一)

铁索拉着心跳
向上, 悠悠
提起来
到 嗓子眼

脱缰的野马踢飞雪白
惊叫
绽开羞红的
花瓣

(二)

万能的主
怜悯
我 怕摔跤

倒地的瞬间我
才发现 人
有比冰雪坚韧的脊骨
主阿, 我看见了你
仁慈的笑

(三)

跪到在地, 仰面朝天
听到了吗?
呼救的声音

当你踏着雪花的欢笑冲来
早已没了
险情
我清清嗓子笑着说:
"谢谢你, 诗人
... ..."

(四)

摔, 再摔
摔碎提起的心

缟素, 匍匐着红
散落了
一地梅花 还是罌粟?
或许
是一只挣脱樊笼
摔伤的鸟
用鲜红的羽毛在雪原上写
我终于
拥抱过蓝天
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 19:37:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

铁索拉着心跳
开的好。

摔, 再摔
体会深。我当时不知道控制速度,滑雪板并着,一摔就出去10多米。然后分别找手套,滑雪板,帽子等等。头顶的缆车集体拍手叫好。
可惜没去Whistler滑。很近。下届冬奥会在那里。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 19:45:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

hi, nobody, 这段才逗乐, 可是实实在在的描写, 当是我摔倒被滑雪板别住, 站不起来. 叫那朋友来救我(还是咱们网友呢) , 他在那傻笑, 等他过来时, 别人早把我拉起来了.

(三)

跪到在地, 仰面朝天
听到了吗?
呼救的声音

当你踏着雪花的欢笑冲来
早已没了
险情
我清清嗓子笑着说:
"谢谢你, 诗人
... ..."
Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 20:04:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

原来还有这个故事,哈哈,笑死了 Laughing
看来咱们网友不可靠。 Laughing
“被滑雪板别住, 站不起来“,很典型!
同时也说明摔得还不够狠,我的都甩出去了 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 20:13:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

心情飞扬呀
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 20:31:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
心情飞扬呀
Very Happy


NOBODY, 看见了吧, 这就是诗人. 见死不救, 还在那乐.
前两个月我们去NIAGARA FALL也这样, 一群诗歌爱好者, 平时称兄道弟的, 当我们从没路的地方连滚带爬的下到瀑布底部, 上来时狼狈不堪, 这些诗人们不救不说, 还在那笑. 晓鸣还拿着摄像机一边摄影一边念叨着解说词. 本来就累晕了, 再一笑, 就差没掉山沟里. Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 21:00:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
原来还有这个故事,哈哈,笑死了 Laughing
看来咱们网友不可靠。 Laughing
“被滑雪板别住, 站不起来“,很典型!
同时也说明摔得还不够狠,我的都甩出去了 Laughing


通常是技术越高, 摔的越重. 我不敢滑, 所以是小摔, 你肯定是高手了.所以就甩的远. Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 21:00:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

劣根性啊。。。还好,早跟诗人划清界限了Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 21:51:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,看来玩得很高兴啊~问好月光妹妹!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 23:03:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

好心情
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PostPosted: 2007-12-04 03:38:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习!!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-04 05:52:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

羡慕了,我也想滑雪——“也想摔那么痛快的一跤”(冰心诗句)呵呵!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-04 06:02:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友.荷梦说的是, 其实快乐源于敢摔的勇气.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-04 07:40:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

Moonlight的滑雪技术不高哈~~~还摔跤!!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-04 13:47:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

古井 wrote:
Moonlight的滑雪技术不高哈~~~还摔跤!!


临一个。哈哈。

今夜的月光
酡红
抄起滑雪板
滑下落矶山

绕过松阴
避开鹿角
却仰面摔倒在
我家池塘
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PostPosted: 2007-12-04 13:57:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
古井 wrote:
Moonlight的滑雪技术不高哈~~~还摔跤!!


今夜的月光
酡红
抄起滑雪板
滑下落矶山

绕过松阴
避开鹿角
却仰面摔倒在
我家池塘


谢谢NOBODY,继续, 有时真想开一个接龙帖, 专写移民的感觉. 这绝不局限于出国人, 比如城乡移民, 它乡创业. 特想知道可否写出更多的新意来.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-04 19:45:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

古井 wrote:
Moonlight的滑雪技术不高哈~~~还摔跤!!


不仅不高, 已经被摔的不敢滑了 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-08 13:22:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习啦..

趁机把首好歌新词帖上,凑个乐..

滑雪情歌

填词/楚天舒(2007年2月18日)
曲/《沙宝亮. 暗香(金粉世家) 片头歌》
http://ok.haomtv.com/mp3/xin/07.rm

当雪花挂满枝头 风景依旧
随妳走山前山后 无论夜昼
溜蓝道闯黑道炼身手 酷爱天地又三九

看白云如雪山不瘦 有了妳严寒亦温柔
往来山间若飞鸥 与妳同消离恨情愁

看白云如雪山不瘦 有了妳严寒亦温柔
从此不会再孤独 伴妳左右暗香盈袖

当雪花挂满枝头 风景依旧
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PostPosted: 2007-12-08 17:19:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy 听着这音乐滑雪最好,最有情调。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-08 17:38:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

楚天舒 wrote:
学习啦..

趁机把首好歌新词帖上,凑个乐..

滑雪情歌

填词/楚天舒(2007年2月18日)
曲/《沙宝亮. 暗香(金粉世家) 片头歌》
http://ok.haomtv.com/mp3/xin/07.rm

当雪花挂满枝头 风景依旧
随妳走山前山后 无论夜昼
溜蓝道闯黑道炼身手 酷爱天地又三九

看白云如雪山不瘦 有了妳严寒亦温柔
往来山间若飞鸥 与妳同消离恨情愁

看白云如雪山不瘦 有了妳严寒亦温柔
从此不会再孤独 伴妳左右暗香盈袖

当雪花挂满枝头 风景依旧


谢谢楚天舒. 你们还能写歌, 真行. 网上真是才子多啊.
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