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陂塘柳·秋郊试马(一番学习，终于把图贴上了)

贺兰山下
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Posted: 2007-11-30 04:47:54 Post subject: 陂塘柳·秋郊试马(一番学习，终于把图贴上了)

陂塘柳·秋郊试马 (已是秋去冬来，却依旧黄叶衰草，秋色连天，西郊试马感慨而作) 望萧萧，秋原无际，长风衰草千里。西郊试马游缰行，驰骋笑谈鞭指。尘激起，逐日去，秦关汉月犹单骑！壮心未已，凭谁识神驹？追风万里，任我行天地。何年矣，总是春花曾似，磋跎多少桃李？拍鞍长叹生髀肉，泪洒豫州衣袂。将一醉，付一阕，残词难尽秋声倚，浮生如寄，但载酒江湖，贺兰山下，夜听朔风吹。 _________________ 贺兰山下，牧马放羊。

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Posted: 2007-11-30 10:24:01 Post subject:

“追风万里，任我行天地“堪属豪放之作。贺兰兄豪情万丈啊！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-11-30 15:52:15 Post subject: Re: 陂塘柳·秋郊试马

贺兰山下 wrote:

陂塘柳·秋郊试马

(已是秋去冬来，却依旧黄叶衰草，秋色连天，西郊试马感慨而作)

望萧萧，秋原无际，
长风衰草千里。
西郊试马游缰行，
驰骋笑谈鞭指。
尘激起，逐日去，
秦关汉月犹单骑！
壮心未已，
凭谁识神驹？
追风万里，
任我行天地。

何年矣，
总是春花曾似，磋跎多少桃李？
拍鞍长叹生髀肉，
泪洒豫州衣袂。
将一醉，付一阕，
残词难尽秋声倚，
浮生如寄，但载酒江湖，
贺兰山下，
夜听朔风吹。

[img width=1024 height=764 ]http://www.pkucn.com/viewthread.php?tid=211549&extra=page%3D1&frombbs=1[/img]

[img width=1024 height=764 ]http://www.pkucn.com/viewthread.php?tid=211549&extra=page%3D1[/img]

感与君同!只是君可潇洒策马,我只能默然观画.问好.

贺兰山下
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Posted: 2007-11-30 16:39:55 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“追风万里，任我行天地“堪属豪放之作。

贺兰兄豪情万丈啊！

谢过朋友！！

恳请多多指教！！！
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贺兰山下
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Posted: 2007-11-30 16:41:46 Post subject: Re: 陂塘柳·秋郊试马

楚人 wrote:

贺兰山下 wrote:

感与君同!只是君可潇洒策马,我只能默然观画.问好.

惭愧，好像不会贴图，贴不上！！！

谢过朋友细读！！！

问楼上各位朋友好！！！
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贺兰山下
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Posted: 2007-11-30 17:30:47 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“追风万里，任我行天地“堪属豪放之作。

贺兰兄豪情万丈啊！

可惜，时人多不喜豪放啊，以为失之词味，呵呵

以婉约为词之正，果然否？

唉——
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qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-12-01 18:39:05 Post subject:

贺兰山下秋试马，北美枫上诗谈兵。豪气逐天际！

冰清
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Posted: 2007-12-01 18:46:27 Post subject:

果然豪放。喜欢！

贺兰山下
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Posted: 2007-12-02 22:21:28 Post subject:

谢过qinghongh朋友谢过冰请朋友呵呵，刚才学着弄弄，终于把图贴上去了 _________________ 贺兰山下，牧马放羊。

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Posted: 2007-12-03 14:13:48 Post subject:

贺兰山下 wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

“追风万里，任我行天地“堪属豪放之作。

贺兰兄豪情万丈啊！

可惜，时人多不喜豪放啊，以为失之词味，呵呵

以婉约为词之正，果然否？

唉——

豪放与婉约的风格,当因时因地因感因人而有别,不应有徧正之说,二者在文坛

上完全可以和谐相容,各得其宜,既可以小桥流水,又可以金刚怒目,多元的风

格才多彩啊!个人浅见,请批评指正.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-12-03 18:21:52 Post subject:

诗配靓图，相得益彰。堪赏~

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