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最后的色彩

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2007-11-29 23:52:53 Post subject: 最后的色彩

最后的色彩就让我以静默的姿态迎接所有的一切还是有一些时间给我的我要把自己仔细的清洗一遍不仅仅是身体还包括灵魂然后我给唇涂上鲜艳的口红因为这是我留给世界的最后一抹色彩我知道已经不需要告别打碎所有的幻想告别的意义不过就是多一种痛吧所以尽管会留一些遗憾我还是选择了沉默此刻我已经都准备好了已经有足够的勇气去面对它因为我的温度已经和冰一样的冷我的意识已经和世界一样的空灵飘飘入世如水之不得不流这是回旋于我耳边的最后一种声音 ......

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Posted: 2007-11-30 07:16:03 Post subject:

生命短暂 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-11-30 09:53:05 Post subject:

此刻我已经都准备好了已经有足够的勇气去面对它因为我的温度已经和冰一样的冷我的意识已经和世界一样的空灵情绪的宣泄需要节制~问好！

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Posted: 2007-11-30 11:49:16 Post subject:

这是回旋于我耳边的最后一种声音泰然了！！！

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Posted: 2007-11-30 15:34:04 Post subject:

好诗，提读！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-12-01 00:56:12 Post subject:

还是有一些时间给我的我要把自己仔细的清洗一遍不仅仅是身体上的污垢还包括灵魂里的肮脏然后我给唇涂上鲜艳的口红因为我明白或许这就是我留给这世界的最后的一抹色彩丧钟为我自己敲响仍要敲出美丽的声音一如你的红唇香在死亡的瞬间 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-12-01 19:57:23 Post subject:

不错

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2008-05-02 22:47:21 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

生命短暂

谢谢评读问好

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2008-05-02 22:48:06 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

此刻我已经都准备好了
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谢谢点评问好

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2008-05-02 22:52:31 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

这是回旋于我耳边的
最后一种声音
泰然了！！！

谢谢你的评读问好

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2008-05-02 22:53:41 Post subject:

彭世学 wrote:

好诗，提读！！

问好世学谢谢

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2008-05-02 22:54:21 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

还是有一些时间给我的
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问好少君谢谢你的点评

吉祥女巫
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Posted: 2008-05-02 22:55:13 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

不错

谢谢迪拜向你问好

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