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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 20:55:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
韩少君 wrote:
很想学习这种“不介入”的写法。好！

梅花须逊三分雪
雪输梅花一段香

也想帮你扶一下眼镜----哈哈



呵呵，先把你的眼镜戴好着～ Cool
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 20:59:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
彭世学 wrote:
墨香，暗沁西墙
囚于硬质镜框。冷艳
被过往的人侧目或评赏
梅，若蜡铸的女子
一再沉默。没人知道
她分分秒秒的渴盼
遗憾 ！ 妙！问好！！


感谢世学的一直关注～ Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 21:12:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
子花 wrote:
明月姐！你眼镜快掉了！！！


呵呵，我用绳子吊着，落不下来～ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 21:42:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
南岩 wrote:
子花 wrote:
明月姐！你眼镜快掉了！！！


我老早都想跟她说了,呵呵!
古今结合的作品,很不错!

该早点说啊，不敢说啊：）
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PostPosted: 2007-12-01 00:25:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
马上写！呵呵！
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PostPosted: 2007-12-02 14:05:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
感覺第一段有點格格不入，最後兩段最好，可能是由於有雪的襯托。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-02 16:39:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
戴玨 wrote:
感覺第一段有點格格不入，最後兩段最好，可能是由於有雪的襯托。

感觉不错，第一段写的时候感觉生硬,在强写,到后面才顺手点~
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PostPosted: 2007-12-02 16:54:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏了.问好
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 09:07:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
俞伟远 wrote:
欣赏了.问好


问好伟远～握！
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