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微尘
吉祥女巫
童生


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PostPosted: 2007-11-29 23:48:52    Post subject: 微尘 Reply with quote

微尘


所有的泪
都起源于那一粒微尘
风无意中将它扬起
落入你无邪的眸


感受到你的疼痛
所以 我们的泪
如断线的珠
在同一刻黯然坠落


叹息的声音
从彼此的心底升起
以不可抵挡之势
击溃了所有的快乐


暗藏的隐痛
在距离中快速繁衍
于短暂的瞬间
促成了两极分化


日急坠 星月不现
阴霾笼罩心的天空
语言的魔方
忽然转不出梦想的画面
文字的积木
总也搭不成希望的形态
......

一切的一切啊
其实 不过是
起源于那粒微尘
我真的惊异
那么微不足道的一粒
怎么就会有
如此强大的力量


如同那长堤上的蚁穴
就这样 摧毁了一切
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 00:43:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗藏的隐痛
在距离中快速繁衍
于短暂的瞬间
促成了两极分化......意向转换有特色,多来.
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上城
进士出身


Joined: 15 Mar 2007
Posts: 2024
Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 00:46:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy
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每个诗人都很重要
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奥冬
秀才


Joined: 09 Mar 2007
Posts: 239
Location: 河北邢台
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 01:15:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

日急坠 星月不现
阴霾笼罩心的天空
语言的魔方
忽然转不出梦想的画面
文字的积木
总也搭不成希望的形态 Wink
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 09:50:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

如同那长堤上的蚁穴
就这样 摧毁了一切

欣赏~
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彭世学
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Joined: 24 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 15:43:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的一首!欣赏!
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认为诗是悬崖上的孤松,栖鸟是她唯一的养料
我的博客:
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《网文荟萃》报:http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2007-11-30 18:47:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

一切的一切啊
其实 不过是
起源于那粒微尘
我真的惊异
那么微不足道的一粒
怎么就会有
如此强大的力量
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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迪拜
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2007-12-01 20:02:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以
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吉祥女巫
童生


Joined: 12 Nov 2007
Posts: 63
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:35:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
暗藏的隐痛
...

谢谢你的评读 问好
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:38:05    Post subject: 谢谢你来读 问好 Reply with quote

伤城 wrote:
Very Happy
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:38:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

奥冬 wrote:
日急坠 星月不现
...

问好奥冬 谢谢你
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:39:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
如同那长堤上的蚁穴
就这样 摧毁了一切

欣赏~
问好明月 谢谢评读
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:40:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

彭世学 wrote:
不错的一首!欣赏!

问好世学 谢谢
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:41:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
一切的一切啊
...
谢谢你 问好
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:42:04    Post subject: 感谢 Reply with quote

迪拜 wrote:
可以

感谢 问好
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