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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 22:22:21    Post subject: 【祈祷】 Reply with quote

【祈祷】
文/半溪明月

窗口挂在灰白的天空
青黑瓦阁楼是唯一的图案
石头藏进大脑
沉入半梦半醒的边缘

一整天卧床,翻看汤姆
《圣经》和祈祷
当天使般的伊娃,剪落一缕缕金发
眼睛不可避免被拂伤
你来安慰我
我悲哽不已

我们的肉体正备受煎熬
耶和华的脚步
一日日临近,他的光明
在云后金霞万丈

主啊,我愿用眼泪来冲刷大地
的偏狂和龌龊
你说:上帝也有打盹的时候
让我们祈祷吧,善良的人


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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 00:33:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

上帝也有打盹的时候
Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 05:13:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

帝也有打盹的时候
我们只有祈祷 Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 07:31:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

第二个出彩!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 08:01:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 16:20:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

对我来说,祈祷是最后的手段。

是对恐惧和绝望的救济。

我祈祷,只向我自己

祈祷自己在彻底绝望的时候

放弃世界-----放弃自己
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 18:20:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

让我们祈祷吧, 上帝会还心灵以宁静
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 05:20:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
对我来说,祈祷是最后的手段。

是对恐惧和绝望的救济。

我祈祷,只向我自己

祈祷自己在彻底绝望的时候

放弃世界-----放弃自己

少君好象都点悲观~
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 05:26:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
上帝也有打盹的时候
Laughing

问好和平岛主~
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 05:40:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

石头藏进大脑
沉入半梦半醒的边缘 。。。。比以往的作品沉稳了,问好。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 05:47:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
帝也有打盹的时候
我们只有祈祷 Crying or Very sad

问好荷梦~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 05:55:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

古井 wrote:
第二个出彩!

谢谢古井~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 05:57:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

不一一回了,打开帖子太慢,问好福治,白水,游旋1~
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 10:42:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,月亮满脸都是眼镜呢 Laughing 可遮住月光了吆。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 16:49:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
哈哈,月亮满脸都是眼镜呢 Laughing 可遮住月光了吆。 Laughing

老花镜,呵呵~
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 17:13:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢半溪明月的这首诗。我每天都 在祈祷,为了美好的事物。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 23:36:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

哎!哎!哎!
你把我的世界埋葬了
我总把你当成我心中的天使
哎!哎!哎!
上帝呀
为我祈祷吧
给我一个天使
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PostPosted: 2007-11-29 06:12:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们的肉体正备受煎熬
耶和华的脚步
一日日临近,他的光明
在云后金霞万丈
欣赏,问好!!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-29 17:34:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
喜欢半溪明月的这首诗。我每天都 在祈祷,为了美好的事物。


感谢海军,我每天也祈祷吧,学学你~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-11-29 17:36:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

一言 wrote:
哎!哎!哎!
你把我的世界埋葬了
我总把你当成我心中的天使
哎!哎!哎!
上帝呀
为我祈祷吧
给我一个天使


呵呵,一言,看到老太婆也不必这么大的反应啊~ Sad
祈祷上帝吧,上帝会给你一个天使的! Very Happy
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