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眼儿媚·樱花纵飘

勿妄言
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Posted: 2007-11-28 08:05:37 Post subject: 眼儿媚·樱花纵飘

蛙纵寒塘古池摇，惊月躲云悄漫天星灿樱飞争落一夜齐凋朦胧仲夏清池寥寂寞守香飘今闻情曲知卿情惦泣献妖娆 [/img] _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-11-28 20:38:57 Post subject:

欣赏．意境不错．不过个人觉得在整体句子的排列上还可再斟酌问好。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

全乐吧
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Posted: 2007-11-28 21:44:44 Post subject: 美而雅

图文并茂，美而雅，欣赏！ _________________ http://hi.baidu.com/fullhappy/ 相逢何必曾相识,萍水之谊网络縁

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Posted: 2007-11-28 22:06:11 Post subject:

WOW, 三个漂亮MM在这论诗, 白水DSG来偷听一个.

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