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江城梅花引．感

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Posted: 2007-11-26 23:42:29 Post subject: 江城梅花引．感

诗书案上已生尘，怕三春，又三春。一夜寒霜，香老了无痕。万种豪情今复去，哀筝远，叹声声、正失神。　失神！失神！泪纷纷，掩重门，酒半温。醉也醉也，醉他个、不识晨昏。梦里情怀，邀月共温存。那管菱花清瘦影，今得趣，向苍天、借几分。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-11-27 13:16:21 Post subject:

醉也醉也，醉他个、不识晨昏爽气. 喜欢

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Posted: 2007-11-27 16:42:56 Post subject:

醉中写出好词来。

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Posted: 2007-11-28 10:16:21 Post subject:

一波三折，写尽温存。送上一首读后感: 暗香盈袖意温存，却去寒云唤酒神。玉液一樽心事了，苍天得趣亦怡魂。

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Posted: 2007-11-28 20:30:46 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

醉也醉也，醉他个、不识晨昏

爽气. 喜欢 Very Happy

能得帅哥喜欢真是得意忘形啊．
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Posted: 2007-11-28 20:31:17 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

醉中写出好词来。

谢谢老师鼓励。多指教。
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Posted: 2007-11-28 20:31:50 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

一波三折，写尽温存。

送上一首读后感:

暗香盈袖意温存，
却去寒云唤酒神。
玉液一樽心事了，
苍天得趣亦怡魂。

已收藏。问老师好。
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Posted: 2007-11-28 20:46:43 Post subject:

叹这一个个出神入化飘逸俊朗的身段 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-28 20:51:05 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

叹这一个个出神入化飘逸俊朗的身段
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谢谢老师鼓励。
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Posted: 2007-11-28 20:55:59 Post subject:

只能说我要拜你为师呢 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-12-02 10:35:35 Post subject:

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只能说我要拜你为师呢
Laughing

那可就折杀我了。
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