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江城梅花引；七律；满庭芳^_^

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Posted: 2007-11-26 18:36:07 Post subject: 江城梅花引；七律；满庭芳^_^

江城梅花引清风何故惹凡尘？恼残春，怨残春，稀里糊涂，洒泪别秋痕。叵奈北风偏不雪，载红叶，倚兰桡、作酒神。酒神，酒神，乱缳纷。浅觅源，深闭门，唤起唤起，唤起那、波散烟昏。琴裂弦留，常叹与谁存。恨得烛花啼泪薄，唇颤抖，发飘摇、左右分。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-11-26 19:16:11 Post subject:

醉里填妙词，挥毫作酒神。

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Posted: 2007-11-26 19:18:33 Post subject:

琴裂弦留，常叹与谁存。恨得烛花啼泪薄，唇颤抖，发飘摇、左右分。 MM, JJ差点被你的诗歌骗出眼泪来. 你一个发飘摇、左右分又把我逗乐了.

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Posted: 2007-11-26 21:08:59 Post subject:

哈哈。太可爱了。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-11-27 15:36:38 Post subject: Re: 江城梅花引^_^

征尘载袖 wrote:

江城梅花引

清风何故惹凡尘？
恼残春，怨残春，稀里糊涂，洒泪别秋痕。
叵奈北风偏不雪，载红叶，倚兰桡、作酒神。

酒神，酒神，乱缳纷。
浅觅源，深闭门，唤起唤起，唤起那、波散烟昏。
琴裂弦留，常叹与谁存。
恨得烛花啼泪薄，唇颤抖，发飘摇、左右分。

脚步飘摇，
醉眼看稿。
脸飞红霞，
键盘乱敲。
发送上网，
好词真妙。
抛却怨恼，
开心一笑。

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Posted: 2007-11-27 17:01:52 Post subject:

刚想哭，却又被你

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Posted: 2007-11-28 10:08:04 Post subject: Re: 江城梅花引^_^

征尘载袖 wrote:

以酒写心，委婉动人。
问好！

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Posted: 2007-11-28 10:09:22 Post subject:

我看李清照也不过如此而已 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-12-03 18:25:04 Post subject:

谢谢各位赏评！只可惜又没把眼泪骗下来^_^ _________________

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Posted: 2007-12-03 18:25:41 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-12-03 18:27:37 Post subject:

七律举步高亭四野望，天涯何处访秋香。九峰叠嶂纤云醉，一叶随风白水忙。不识观音堪酩酊，但知龙井可橙黄。汤温翠碗滋眉秀，烟敛波心浅浅光。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-12-03 18:35:32 Post subject:

载袖，特喜欢“酒神，酒神，乱缳纷”。就冲这一句，真想为你斟上一杯。

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Posted: 2007-12-03 19:21:41 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

七律

举步高亭四野望，天涯何处访秋香。九峰叠嶂纤云醉，一叶随风白水忙。
不识观音堪酩酊，但知龙井可橙黄。汤温翠碗滋眉秀，烟敛波心浅浅光。

袖袖, 正想你呢, 你就回来了. Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-12-03 20:32:38 Post subject:

这丫头鬼灵精怪的． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-12-09 04:50:24 Post subject:

有灵气，有雅气。 _________________ 清狂傲世随天性,仗义疏财任我行。博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/duzhizhang440

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Posted: 2007-12-09 18:16:51 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

载袖，特喜欢“酒神，酒神，乱缳纷”。就冲这一句，真想为你斟上一杯。

那要68度原浆，还要用匝啤杯^_^
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袖袖, 正想你呢, 你就回来了. Very Happy

姐姐，年末了，我们这里事儿挺多。我经常来看看，别想我哈^_^
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Posted: 2007-12-09 18:21:25 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

这丫头鬼灵精怪的．

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Posted: 2007-12-09 18:22:23 Post subject:

duzhi wrote:

有灵气，有雅气。

谢谢，欢迎常来^_^
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