冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-11-27 11:59:54 Post subject: 读征尘载袖、暗香如沁《江城梅花引》 |
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读征尘载袖、暗香如沁《江城梅花引》
暗香盈袖意温存,
却去寒云唤酒神。
玉液一樽心事了,
苍天得趣亦怡魂。
录:征尘载袖《江城梅花引》
清风何故惹凡尘?
恼残春,怨残春,稀里糊涂,洒泪别秋痕。
叵奈北风偏不雪,载红叶,倚兰桡、作酒神。
酒神,酒神,乱缳纷。
浅觅源,深闭门,唤起唤起,唤起那、波散烟昏。
琴裂弦留,常叹与谁存。
恨得烛花啼泪薄,唇颤抖,发飘摇、左右分。
录:暗香如沁《江城梅花引.感》
诗书案上已生尘,怕三春,又三春。一夜寒霜,香老了无痕。万种豪情今复去,哀筝远,叹声声、正失神。
失神!失神!泪纷纷,掩重门,酒半温。醉也醉也,醉他个、不识晨昏。梦里情怀,邀月共温存。那管菱花清瘦影,今得趣,向苍天、借几分。 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-11-27 13:30:33 Post subject: |
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赞一个 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-27 14:26:13 Post subject: |
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WOW,冰清好诗. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2007-11-27 16:30:09 Post subject: |
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冰清老师好诗。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-27 16:59:06 Post subject: |
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冰清老师好诗! |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-11-28 09:56:31 Post subject: |
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谢岛主、白水、qinghongh、莹雪鼓励!
征尘载袖、暗香如沁的《江城梅花引》,一波三折,以酒写心。我的确非常喜欢。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-11-28 09:58:42 Post subject: |
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你打收条我高兴!可千万别称“老师”。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2007-11-28 12:44:32 Post subject: |
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好,三位大作皆为精品! |
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征尘载袖 秀才

Joined: 18 Aug 2007 Posts: 527 Location: 臭豆腐作坊 征尘载袖Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-03 19:34:34 Post subject: |
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冰清老师感动得我热泪盈眶,只是泪水太热,都蒸发了,没淌下来^_^ _________________
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-12-11 09:59:17 Post subject: |
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秋版,仔细看看。我是偷着那两位才女的! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-12-11 09:59:44 Post subject: |
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秋版,仔细看看。我是偷着那两位才女的! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-12-11 10:04:40 Post subject: |
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征尘载袖 wrote: |
冰清老师感动得我热泪盈眶,只是泪水太热,都蒸发了,没淌下来^_^ |
袖袖,见你就乐! |
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