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读征尘载袖、暗香如沁《江城梅花引》
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 11:59:54    Post subject: 读征尘载袖、暗香如沁《江城梅花引》 Reply with quote

读征尘载袖、暗香如沁《江城梅花引》

暗香盈袖意温存,
却去寒云唤酒神。
玉液一樽心事了,
苍天得趣亦怡魂。

录:征尘载袖《江城梅花引》

清风何故惹凡尘?
恼残春,怨残春,稀里糊涂,洒泪别秋痕。
叵奈北风偏不雪,载红叶,倚兰桡、作酒神。

酒神,酒神,乱缳纷。
浅觅源,深闭门,唤起唤起,唤起那、波散烟昏。
琴裂弦留,常叹与谁存。
恨得烛花啼泪薄,唇颤抖,发飘摇、左右分。

录:暗香如沁《江城梅花引.感》
诗书案上已生尘,怕三春,又三春。一夜寒霜,香老了无痕。万种豪情今复去,哀筝远,叹声声、正失神。  
失神!失神!泪纷纷,掩重门,酒半温。醉也醉也,醉他个、不识晨昏。梦里情怀,邀月共温存。那管菱花清瘦影,今得趣,向苍天、借几分。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 13:30:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

赞一个
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 14:26:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOW,冰清好诗.
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 16:30:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清老师好诗。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 16:59:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清老师好诗!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 04:56:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

老师厉害.收藏
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 09:56:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢岛主、白水、qinghongh、莹雪鼓励!
征尘载袖、暗香如沁的《江城梅花引》,一波三折,以酒写心。我的确非常喜欢。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 09:58:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗香如沁 wrote:
老师厉害.收藏

你打收条我高兴!可千万别称“老师”。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 12:44:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

好,三位大作皆为精品!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 19:34:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清老师感动得我热泪盈眶,只是泪水太热,都蒸发了,没淌下来^_^
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 20:31:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈.楼上的太调皮了。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 09:59:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
好,三位大作皆为精品!


秋版,仔细看看。我是偷着那两位才女的!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 09:59:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
好,三位大作皆为精品!


秋版,仔细看看。我是偷着那两位才女的!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-11 10:04:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
冰清老师感动得我热泪盈眶,只是泪水太热,都蒸发了,没淌下来^_^


袖袖,见你就乐!
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