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与墙有关
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PostPosted: 2007-05-06 20:16:49    Post subject: 与墙有关 Reply with quote

与墙有关



墙,裸露于日光灯里

耀眼的白光

映照不断端起的酒瓶



一个又一个的瓶子被倒空

墙开始在心里

墙开始变黑

光在逃遁

我就不断深入



墙是一大片的寂静

空旷的寂静



城市的声音或诱惑的灯

喑然失色

啤酒泡沫的反光

却由我轻而易举地抓住

唯我独占

实实在在



墙在对面

任凭穿越



瓶子倒下的姿态很美

谁也看不见

2007-5-5修
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PostPosted: 2007-05-06 20:30:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

唯我独占

实实在在
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 07:53:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

瓶子倒下的姿态很美
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 14:14:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

继续努力! Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 00:48:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

提!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 08:14:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

墙在对面

任凭穿越


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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 16:05:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友的批评和指教
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 16:56:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

道够进入墙里,不容易!!呵呵,质感的诗!问好!!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 23:34:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢过朋友.问好
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 02:37:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢。
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