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《★纳鞋》

古井
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Posted: 2007-11-25 21:16:39 Post subject: 《★纳鞋》

★纳鞋母亲的右手最能穿透冬夜一根针比窗外的寒风明亮搭在腿上搓成的麻绳往复在一个脚印上一层泥土的高度埋葬一朵桃花的开落我要走的路母亲换算成了时间 “这双鞋能穿四个月” 不经意深入指尖的针母亲看到的只是血珠疼痛，来不及思考

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-11-26 10:37:18 Post subject:

慈母 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

溪语
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Posted: 2007-11-26 11:12:59 Post subject:

母亲的右手最能穿透冬夜一根针比窗外的寒风明亮 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-26 18:41:58 Post subject:

我要走的路母亲换算成了时间 “这双鞋能穿四个月” 平实感人.喜欢这种描述.

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-11-26 18:47:40 Post subject:

好！欣赏！感情真挚饱满。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-11-26 19:31:47 Post subject:

真挚感人~

古井
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Posted: 2007-11-27 19:02:43 Post subject:

谢谢 hepingdao 老师光临！

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Posted: 2007-11-27 19:05:59 Post subject:

母亲的右手最能穿透冬夜一根针比窗外的寒风明亮 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西谢谢溪语！

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Posted: 2007-11-27 19:07:47 Post subject:

我要走的路母亲换算成了时间 “这双鞋能穿四个月” 平实感人.喜欢这种描述. 谢谢白水老师欣赏！

古井
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Posted: 2007-11-29 07:27:23 Post subject:

好！欣赏！感情真挚饱满。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!! 谢谢老师光临！

古井
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Posted: 2007-11-29 07:29:30 Post subject:

真挚感人~ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/wuxuhong 谢谢半溪明月光临！

nobody
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Posted: 2007-11-29 13:33:11 Post subject:

母亲的右手最能穿透冬夜开的好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-29 16:54:43 Post subject:

一根针比窗外的寒风明亮好诗！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-11-29 17:50:18 Post subject:

比你前面的作品这首没有新意

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