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攥紧春天抚过的叶子
俞伟远
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PostPosted: 2007-11-24 19:55:11    Post subject: 攥紧春天抚过的叶子 Reply with quote

攥紧春天抚过的叶子

——同事婚纱照题诗之一



风继续吹

不要问它从哪里来

又要到哪里去



幽幽的树林

目光逆风而行

攥紧春天抚过的叶子

急越的夏再一次

穿越根根脉络

牵扯你的心跳


他肯定会听到我的歌吟

--------题同事之婚纱照之二



我在季节的边缘

轻轻睡下

风很轻的话语

没有打动我专心的梦



叶子持续地落下

我知道其中的一张

一定属于我

就这样入睡

等待再等待

他在梦里

肯定在某时某地

听见我梦里的歌吟

2007-11-24午后

我依然清澈如水

-------题同事之婚纱照之三



就这么一抹轻纱

再怎么的白

不能遮掩我比白还纯洁的美

比白还要白的清纯

春天过去夏天走远

多彩的秋呵

我依然

目光清澈如水

远远望你

2007-11-24



再一次回眸

--------题照之四



把该说的都说了

它们随风远去

我得留下

紧靠回忆

再一次回眸可能想

或者不想你

2007-11-24



赶不上时间的风

--------题照之五

渴望付出我的所有

却赶不上时间的风

左眼看到的是你

右眼看到的是你

什么时候

我要把你锁在心里

2007-11-24
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-11-24 22:36:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

很不错的题照。
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游旋1
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 07:28:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵!不错,够形象的。
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俞伟远
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 16:19:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢杯中冲浪,游旋1两朋友阅评.问好
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 18:18:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉得到那份甜美. 请向这对新人捎去北美枫的祝福. Very Happy
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