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《望雪兴叹》
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 03:33:04    Post subject: 《望雪兴叹》 Reply with quote
《望雪兴叹》

　文／墨林

北风钻进汗毛孔
一枚枚银子随风回旋
从天上飘飘洒洒
轻柔地落在掌心


触动那根欲望的弦
守望无法珍藏的瞬间
闪亮的是银子多好
日后，谁还怕涨价！


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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 06:15:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
同感啊，物价逼人幻想啊
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 07:15:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏了 不错 问好
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 04:06:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
取向和立意都不错！微感不足是：雪花----银子？

银子砸在头上要起包啊？“银屑”如何？
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 07:07:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
William Zhou周道模 wrote:
取向和立意都不错！微感不足是：雪花----银子？

银子砸在头上要起包啊？“银屑”如何？

银屑　　不是头屑吗？呵呵，不好！
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