黎凛
童生
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 76
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 Posted: 2006-12-10 05:00:40 Post subject: 平安夜 |
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平安夜
勇士攻进了城堡
小姐们从床上起身
从容打扫战场。她们个个衣袂优雅
裹住城市的溃疡
大街阑珊。更夫手提灯笼，梆子声声
“上帝刚刚死去。他死的时候
左手抓着锈蚀的十字架
右手抓着闪闪发亮的金币。”
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维鹿延
秀才
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
维鹿延Collection |
| Posted: 2006-12-10 06:21:25 Post subject: |
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平安夜深深几许。
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散步者身体里面的声音 |
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左岸
秀才
Joined: 12 Oct 2006
Posts: 215
Location: 中国大连
左岸Collection |
| Posted: 2006-12-10 20:56:10 Post subject: |
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平安夜，起笔不凡，场景宏大，反讽深刻。
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黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2006-12-11 05:30:12 Post subject: |
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| 场景式描述. |
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