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三姨父

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-18 17:51:51 Post subject: 三姨父

三姨父天上几只鸟儿，它们零落地飞是被风吹起的落叶．他赤脚走在田梗上，裤管挽到膝盖像被风摇弯的节节草．孤独的落日下，向晚的风吹出了他的泪水．我看见脸上被风追赶的忧伤我知道，每到黄昏三姨父心中该有多少烈马奔腾多少梦想骑在马背上就像不远处从山后弯过来的火车发一声喊钻进了大山的内心 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-11-18 18:06:29 Post subject:

海军的诗歌常渗着淡淡的忧伤. 感人.

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Posted: 2007-11-18 18:15:19 Post subject:

天上几只鸟儿，它们零落地飞是被风吹起的落叶 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

nobody
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Posted: 2007-11-18 19:48:39 Post subject:

是啊，海军的诗很有特点。不激烈，但有深沉的情感。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

kokho
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Posted: 2007-11-20 09:50:14 Post subject:

三姨父心中该有多少烈马奔腾多少梦想骑在马背上就像不远处从山后弯过来的火车发一声喊钻进了大山的内心《》爽快！！！。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-11-20 16:04:37 Post subject:

孤独男人的预警海军还深懂小说的手法读 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-27 02:00:17 Post subject:

谢楼上诗人们！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-11-27 02:32:51 Post subject:

像不远处从山后弯过来的火车发一声喊钻进了大山的内心 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

莞君
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Posted: 2007-11-27 07:56:44 Post subject:

欣赏的一个很好问好 _________________ 莞君

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-28 02:16:45 Post subject:

谢冲浪诗人和莞君诗人 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-11-28 04:57:17 Post subject:

第一节感受到了一个农民的孤独与忧伤，但第二节却给人以很大的冲击，深入人物内心，丰满了三姨爹的形象。学习！

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-28 17:16:37 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

像不远处从山后弯过来的火车
发一声喊
钻进了大山的内心

谢冲浪兄！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-28 17:17:50 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

第一节感受到了一个农民的孤独与忧伤，但第二节却给人以很大的冲击，深入人物内心，丰满了三姨爹的形象。学习！

谢诗人！！！
_________________
走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

溪语
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Posted: 2007-12-03 04:59:35 Post subject:

每到黄昏三姨父心中该有多少烈马奔腾多少梦想骑在马背上就像不远处从山后弯过来的火车发一声喊钻进了大山的内心 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-12-03 08:27:29 Post subject:

观人前路知已来路具悲悯省思的见地 _________________ 阅夜.冰小夕 http://blog.sina.com.tw/faninsa223/

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Posted: 2007-12-03 17:50:40 Post subject:

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