沉木 童生
Joined: 05 Nov 2007 Posts: 6
沉木Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-05 20:15:38 Post subject: 贴一首,来报到! |
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囚
灵魂站在肉体之外
两条蛇对峙。呼吸晃出水声
情人美好一笑
迅速化干戈为玉帛。火车爬出城
报纸忘了扣胸罩扣子
垂下一条粉腿。蜘蛛奋力一扑
事情粘乎乎的
官员不动声色。我是春光
你是政策
谁囚禁了谁?铁倦缩在火里
血一样美丽恸哭 _________________ 不是我找到了诗歌,而是诗歌找到了我! |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-05 22:01:03 Post subject: |
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犀利~
欢迎沉木! |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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沉木 童生
Joined: 05 Nov 2007 Posts: 6
沉木Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-17 21:51:55 Post subject: |
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谢了明月! _________________ 不是我找到了诗歌,而是诗歌找到了我! |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2007-11-17 22:04:26 Post subject: |
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叙述非常别致有力。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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