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沉木
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PostPosted: 2007-11-05 20:15:38    Post subject: 贴一首,来报到! Reply with quote

    囚

灵魂站在肉体之外
两条蛇对峙。呼吸晃出水声

情人美好一笑
迅速化干戈为玉帛。火车爬出城

报纸忘了扣胸罩扣子
垂下一条粉腿。蜘蛛奋力一扑

事情粘乎乎的
官员不动声色。我是春光

你是政策
谁囚禁了谁?铁倦缩在火里
血一样美丽恸哭
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-11-05 22:01:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

犀利~

欢迎沉木!
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-11-06 03:06:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

报纸忘了扣胸罩扣子
垂下一条粉腿。蜘蛛奋力一扑

事情粘乎乎的
官员不动声色。我是春光

——我欣赏这几句,很有意思。
欢迎新朋友。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-06 03:06:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

报纸忘了扣胸罩扣子
垂下一条粉腿。蜘蛛奋力一扑

事情粘乎乎的
官员不动声色。我是春光

——我欣赏这几句,很有意思。
欢迎新朋友。
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沉木
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PostPosted: 2007-11-17 21:51:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢了明月!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-17 22:04:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

叙述非常别致有力。
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