qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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 Posted: 2007-11-15 17:32:06 Post subject: 梦故乡 |
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梦故乡
曾醉故乡山丘，
诗燃万里乡愁。
梦中几访故土，
情注江河奔流。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-11-15 18:04:53 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏，GG的诗意境很好。 |
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qinghongh
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Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2007-11-15 18:09:33 Post subject: |
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| 谢莹雪MM赞赏。首句还是来自MM的好词呢。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2007-11-15 19:17:58 Post subject: |
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‘诗燃天涯乡愁”抒发了浓烈的乡愁，妙句！
“燃“字用得特好。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2007-11-15 20:04:02 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
‘诗燃天涯乡愁”抒发了浓烈的乡愁，妙句！
“燃“字用得特好。 |
谢黄老师点评，问好！ |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2007-11-18 15:04:01 Post subject: |
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| 情真意切！“燃“字的确用得特好。堪称一字之师~ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2007-11-18 17:06:13 Post subject: |
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| 谢晓松点评，握手！ |
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