楚人 童生
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 63 Location: 中国大陆 楚人Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-14 17:42:17 Post subject: 冬日有感--和冰清 |
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冬日有感
天寒日暮乡关远,
瘦减容光屡梦家.
又愧高堂决眦苦,
泪吟一阕小梅花.
2007年11月14日
于多伦多 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2007-11-15 18:19:12 Post subject: |
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同感。日暮乡关何处是,烟波江上使人愁。 |
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楚人 童生
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 63 Location: 中国大陆 楚人Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-17 18:16:13 Post subject: |
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谢二位朋友! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-17 23:09:21 Post subject: |
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日暮乡关惊梦影,
容光焕发又回家。
高堂迎笑黄花酒:
同志何妨天一涯。
谢谢楚人!
你的思乡曲,衷情,感人。因电脑故障奉和羁迟。见谅! |
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楚人 童生
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 63 Location: 中国大陆 楚人Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-21 17:45:18 Post subject: |
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谢冰清好诗相和,珍藏! |
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