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Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
Posted: 2007-11-13 12:24:14 Post subject: 气死李白 |
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一只酒杯
怎么能装得下
两个月亮
琥珀里
溢出桂花的体香
是不是嫦娥
顺着醉意
冲澡
我听见
星星溅落银河的声音
一只酒杯
怎么能接得住
七个仙女
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-13 15:06:15 Post subject: |
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诗思灵动!仰望天宇之外,请关注人间、民间、民心。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-13 18:12:44 Post subject: |
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一只酒杯
怎么能接得住
七个仙女。。。。。。言之意,在诗之外。问好。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-13 20:06:56 Post subject: |
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一只酒杯
怎么能接得住
七个仙女
那嫦娥变悟空了, 一根毫毛就吹出七个来, 再吹一口仙气岂不变出一群  |
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溪语 秀才
Joined: 16 Mar 2007 Posts: 509 Location: 中国恩施 溪语Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-14 06:51:50 Post subject: |
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我听见
星星溅落银河的声音
一只酒杯
怎么能接得住
七个仙女 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西 |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-14 07:15:22 Post subject: 精彩的一个 问好 |
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ti 欣赏了 问好 _________________ 莞君 |
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古井 秀才
Joined: 01 Jun 2007 Posts: 190
古井Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-14 07:43:24 Post subject: |
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岛主放的开阔 |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-14 17:29:18 Post subject: |
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李白狂放的紧~  |
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蓝郁 童生

Joined: 13 Nov 2007 Posts: 37
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Posted: 2007-11-14 17:34:52 Post subject: |
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呵呵,似抑实扬。酒里乾坤大,李白欢喜着呢~ |
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白琳 童生
Joined: 29 May 2007 Posts: 75
白琳Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-15 03:46:49 Post subject: |
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哈哈,和平岛真要把李白气死了,岛主身临其境,看嫦蛾洗澡,皂沫溅了一身. |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-15 11:20:09 Post subject: |
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独特的一个 再赏 _________________ 莞君 |
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上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-16 22:08:07 Post subject: |
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这一首,有些空灵。岛主诗大进 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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