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初次拜坛，囊中羞涩，发两首，请大家指点！

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Posted: 2007-06-30 06:10:36 Post subject: 初次拜坛，囊中羞涩，发两首，请大家指点！

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Posted: 2007-06-30 20:47:28 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

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感谢你的美誉，初习诗歌，请多指教！

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Posted: 2007-06-30 20:49:57 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

问好古井诗人，常来交流啊！！

问好海军，多砍！

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Posted: 2007-06-30 21:02:08 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-07-02 01:57:51 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-07-02 02:41:26 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-11-13 06:40:27 Post subject: 对浓厚生活的提炼

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Posted: 2007-11-13 10:06:30 Post subject:

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